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Jul 27, 2010 11:39 AM

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I guess you must have heard the saying, a poem is never finished.
But if your working on a poem and you would like to hear the minds of others, post them here.

Please provide argumented criticism, no rude statements.

Oct 26, 2011 10:21 PM

helion1

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there you are once again
in a situation where crying is the obvious thing to do
you who believes that tears are a thing that will always return
have vowed to yourself to never let them overflow

my thoughts of yesterday always disappearing
but if i compare them to you its like you are the only one not lost in lies
you who has always been honest to yourself
have been lied to by the world
but even then you stand on a floor deserved for

since that time you have not wondered about anything
the only wrong you can do now is look down on them

Oct 26, 2011 10:33 PM

shida

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Jul 2009

Kinda good

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