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Dec 27, 2012 5:33 PM
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| This is where I tell you a story. The story's plot starts like this. Tina who is a tomboy wanted to make her third year in highschool the best one for her as well as her friends. But she starts to get the feeling that someone is stalking her. She finds out that it is her old babysitter and childhood friend Bruce who came back to for fill a promise they both made. He wont take no for a answer and the more he shows his love to her, the more she started to fall for him. Any criticism is nice ether they are nice or mean as hell. Chapter one: Rinnnnnnnnnnn.." Today is gonna be a start of a very fun year. Tina's Mother: Breakfast is ready dear. Tina: Thanks mom but that's ok, All I need is toast. Tina's Dad: Just be careful when walking on lone ok Tina: Ok dad I will(sometime I think you worried to much) Tina: (Hello their my name is Tina lowll and I way look a lot like a boy with a girls name but I am a girl and I get that I look like a prince. Today starts my third year in Tree hills high school and I'm hoping to make it the best year yet for me as well as my friends.) As Tina walks to school, she felt that someone is following him. She begins to get very nervous so she turn around really fast but when she did, Nobody was their. Tina: I could of swore somebody was behind me. Maybe is just my imagination.(I can't believe I let dad allude me with his worries) Little that she knows that her assumption is true as someone is follow her. Mysterious Person: Tina.(deep voice) I have found you Once she has made it to her high school called Tree hill high, Tina heard her name calling and sees that here friends are waiting for her. Mimi: Tina Hey! Clowey: Hey Tina how is it going. Tina: Hey there. They are both twins but they are completely different from each other. Mime is the one with pig tails and is the hyperactive one who always act childish while Clowey is the self mature one. Like any friends they walk to class with each other and begins to talk about the latest gossip which Tina isn't interested but this is an exception to her as its some news that she might be interested. Clowey: Have you heard Tina? I heard that the popular transfer Japanese student talks about you a lot. Mimi: OOOOH I think Yuki has a crush on you. Tina: REALLY!? I mean. I don't know what to… Just then a shadow figure appear that is watching her. She check quickly but nothing is there. Both: Tina is there something wrong? Tina: No nothing. Once they got to class, Tina could not get that feeling off of being stalk. She gaze at the window thinking who could it be as he feels that its something similar. Its like he know the person. At the end of the day she decides to walk home to shake that feeling off. Mimi: Uhhhh do you have to go? Tina: Ya because I just feel like it for some reason. Clowey: Ok take care. Tina: I really letting this get the better of me. I hope a good night sleep wi- Just then a bunch of guys put the jump on her. Guy 9: Ohh what do we got here Guy 4: Why this one, She is too much resemble of a boy. Leader: Hey its my pick. So how about we have a little fun? Tina never felt this afraid ever since she was a child. She close her eyes tight hoping this is over fast but when she took a peek, she sees that some one is fighting them off. He grabs the leader and put his neck on the side walk Leader: Please let me go ugh! He kept holding him down. The leader notice a car heading right for him and it seems the driver is not paying much attention to whats up ahead. Leader: AHHHH! Please let me go! I promise I won't do this again! The Mysterious person smile and let him go before he got hit by the car. Mysterious person: Don't you ever do that again and if you do, I'll kill you. The leader and the rest head out and run in fear. Tina: Thank you very much. I could of taken them my self but they are in a- But as Tina got close to him, he hugs her out of nowhere acting like he have never seen her. Mysterious person: Oh Tina I finally found you. Tina: I'm sorry but I'm confuse? I don't remember making older friends. Saying that made him make a threatening face. Tina backs away from him as he leaves but before he leaves he had this to say. Mysterious Person: It seems that I'll have to put the memories back into you. Tina: The way he said that that really sends chills down my spine. She leaves home itmedelly after that. The very next day during class, Tina could not shake what he said. She thought long and hard if she ever made any older friends. She only remember one but couldn't be possible as he was a lot kinder. All this distacted her from paying attention to her teacher. History Teacher: Tina would you repeat what I just say? Tina: OH ummmmmm? Assistant principle: Tina could you come with me a bit. Tina: Sure!( That really have save me from embarrassment). Assistant principle: I have call you because your cousin came and he wanted to talk to you. Tina: Really because the last time I have saw him, he is living in Montana.(He could of at least told me. That idiot always like to surprise me). Just as they have enter the room, She is in total shock to see that it's the same person she saw yesterday. The assistant principle left for them to talk and Tina wanted to say something but could not say a single word as he closes the day to let them talk. Mysterious person: I would like to talk with you about something. Deep smile. |
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Dec 27, 2012 5:34 PM
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| Chapter 2: Mysterious person: Are you really that surprise to see me Tina. Tina becomes really nervous when he saw him again. Her heart is beating very raperly but she calms down and tries to handle it. Tina: Ok! Who the hell are you and how do you know me!? When she ask that, He gets very furious and slams one of his left arm on the table. He than quickly smile and gets close to her. She backs away but he grabs both of her arms while she struggles. Tina: What the hell are you do- He then kiss her which Tina is took by surprise. She couldn't resist but she snaps out of it and slap him hard which only made him smile. Mysterious person: (laughing softly) Have you really fogotten me after all those years? Tina: Ok you really are freaking me out. Mysterious person: Well we use to hang out 9 years ago. Tina: Ok I don't know you and the only friend I remember is Bruce who is not like you. Mysterious person: You'll be surprise becuase you'll looking at him. Tina: Wait. Is that you Bruce? Bruce: Hmm. I'm really glad that you remember me. You see, I have always been in love with when we first met. I have been looking for you for so long and now that I found you, I will never let you go. Bruce hug Tina very deeply. Tina in so much shock, could not move after finding out. After that event, She could barly go through the day at school. Once school is over, she goes home as fast as she could. Tina's Mom: Welcome home. Tina: Umm mom is dad home? Tina's Mom: He is still at work. Tina: Oh thank goodness : ). Umm anyway I wanted to ask you something. Tina's Mom: Sure what is it. Tina: Do you remember any person name Bruce by any chance? Tina's Mom: Oh ya I remember him. It is so glad of him to help us at the state we were in back then. Oh did you met him today. Tina: No I just wanted to ask. I'll be at my room. She heads to room and lie on the bed trying to forget what happen but just can't. Tina: I don't get it! Why can't I stop thinking about that moment. I remember back then that I was always a trouble kid back then. Bruce was the person who help me out of trouble. He always have that cheery additude and that smile I have seen always shows that. When I see him smile, I just had to smile no madder how tuff times were back then. Now all those years pass and seeing him now really surprise me. That smile doesn't show that he is fully happy. All I see is anger and fear and I couldn't smile after seeing that. I wonder what happen to him after all those years? After that talk to herself, she went to bed to sleep. When Tina goes to sleep, she starts to remember about that certain moment when Bruce is crying that he has to move. Its a flashback of the last time when she and Bruce have a final moment before he moves away. Tina: Don't cry Bruce: I can't "Sob" because I like you "sob". Tina: I like you to. Here take this. Its my moms ear ring. She told me that if you give this to the person you like, you'll be with each other forever. Bruce: Ok I'll take this as a promise. If we ever see each other again, We'll be together forever. Tina: I'm hoping for it. Right after that, she makes ups as the sun rises. Tina: I'm guessing I didn't remember the promise until I slept. I was a young kid back them. I don't even know what I ment is true.(Pause) I wonder where I put that ear ring. Later she gets dress and decided to go to school early. Tina: Oh I sure hope that my math teacher gives me the credit for this paper( He really is one harsh teacher O_O) Then suddenly a harsh wind blew her paper away. Tina: OH NO I'M NOT LOSING THAT CREDIT! She chases the paper but couldn't catch up to it. But just as its about to be blew away, it landed on Bruces hand. Bruce: Here is your paper my queen. Tina: Hey Bruce. looks away. Don't call me your queen. Bruce: I thought you like being call that. After all we play queen and servent 9 years ago. Tina: Blushes. Ok I have enough of your ramble. She leaves to school but as she pass him, she notice a blink of light on the side walk. She wonder what it is so she pick it up and notice it's her mom's ear ring. Tina: Is this the ear ring I- Bruce: Oh glad you found it. It always drop out of my pockets. I've been taking care of that for a very long time as it shows the bond we had back then. Where is yours? Tina: Well I don't know where I- He then suddenly grab her and puts the ear ring on her ear by force. Tina: OWWWW WHAT THE HELL! Bruce why did you do that!? Tina didn't wanted to be near him so she run off to the school quickly as fast as she can. But didn't realize that he was following her. |
Dec 27, 2012 5:38 PM
#3
| Chapter 3: Tina runs quickly threw the Neighborhood to get to her school as quickly as possible. Once she got in, there is barley much students at this time. She goes to the nurses office and sees that she is not in her office at the moment. Tina: Great she is not here. Ow. That Bruce is one mess up person. Serously what is his problem? I'm guessing people can change very dramatacaly after many years. You know behind that face, I can see that he really does love me. Shakes her head. Ok what am I saying? Just need to get this earing off. Ow! He really jam this hard. Bruce: What are you doing? Tina: Huh!? Ok what are you doing here!? Bruce: I'm here to make sure you didn't take that earing off. Tina: Look just get the hell out of here before students come here and leave me alone as I just want to take this earing off. Turns to the mirror. Bruce made very deep anger expression. Tina didn't notice that he grab a gem stone off the nurse's desk and throws it at the mirrior shattering it which caught her by surprise. Tina: WHY DID YOU- He then picks her up off the floor and puts her on one of the nurses beds and lays on top of her. She fights back but then hears him crying. Tina: Bruce? Bruce: I'm sorry. said with a wipering voice. I know that what I'm doing is weird, force, and not natural but I have always love for so long. I know it because I couldn't fall with any other girl and I kept thinking about you. You are always on my mind, so its only natural for me to see you. But then I kept thinking of you with another boy and I just cant stand it. If this isn't love than what is? Tina is capture by his emotional face and couldn't resist him. The two gets closer to kiss but then the nurse came back and sees the shatter mirror. Nurse: What the hell happen here!? This made her snap out of it. Tina: Ok I think you should leave. I'll go distract the nurse so that you- Bruce grabs hold of her and puts her on her lap. Tina: Hey what are you doing! Bruce: You know I heard some boy in your school is interested in ya. Am I right? Well I won't let him have you because you are my girl. He then commits sexual acts on her Nurse: Who is there? Tina: Hey the nurse is coming here. You know what will happen if she sees us!? Bruce: I don't care. He continues with the sexual acts having him kissing her and having his hand grasping her body. Tina: Dammit! He has a strong grasp and can't break free. The nurse barges in and opens the curtain only to see Bruce laying on the bed in which she mistakenly took him as a student do to how his face looks very young. He hides Tina next him under the covers. Nurse: Was it you who broke the window. Bruce: I'm sorry. I just got a massive headache which made me go delusional. I couldn't control myself so I try laying down and rest my head. Nurse: Do you need any medication or something? Bruce: No that is ok. Tina: ( I can't believe that I let him get away for what he did.) When the nurse left, Tina gets out of the cover. Bruce: See I told you that no one notice. Tina: Just get out of here before the school starts. She leaves out of the nurses office and slam the door in anger. Tina: UGH! I can't believe he did that! How could someone I use to know would do those thing to me!? Takes a deep breath and lies downs. But when think about, what he did is something I couldn't get from most guys. I have dated many other guys but the most who I dated only care for one thing. She looks back to all the memories of those brake ups. Guy 1: I'm sorry. Its just that your not my type. Guy 2: Its just that you look to much like a boy and I don't people to think wrong of me. Guy 3: Sorry but I just can't stand how you look. Guy 4: You just don't got the looks like many other girls I have seen. Tina: But when Bruce shows his, he really mean it and that is something I'm looking for in a guy. Shakes her head. No I cant let this go threw because if I did then this will never stop. The next time I see him, I'll let him down nice and easy. The very next morning, She looks around in her room for that science homework. Tina: Where is it! If I don't find then I'll get scold and she is even worse than my math teacher. Yes I found it! Huh? Is that the other ear ring. She looks at herself at the mirror on her desk. Tina: Well I guess it wouldn't hurt. As she walks threw the neighborhood, Bruce is right up in her sights as she expected. Bruce: Hello Tina. Tina: I knew you pop up. Bruce: Oh I see that you have found the other earring Tina: Well I thought since you put the other earring on me, I figure that I would complete the look. says in a sarcastic matter. Bruce: You look even more beautiful then before. Tina: Listen Bruce I want you to stay out of life for now on. Bruce: What! Tina: Look I am flattered about your feelings about me. In fact you're the first person who confess to me. I will never forget that but I just don't think it would work out. Maybe if you still live here and get to know each then yes I would of say yes but you have change and your not the friend I use to know. Lets just date people are own age ok. Also I wouldn't lie about this that I was happy to see again even if you are like this instead of the person I use to know. Tina leaves for school but didn't see what his reaction is of what she said. Bruce: Tina? During fourth period, all goes well just like any other day. Tina is all focus on her work and not letting anything distract her. But while everybody is focus on their work as well as the teacher eye balls to make sure they are not distracted. They didn't notice Bruce who is look threw the window. He puts both pairs of his finger nails on the windows and started scratching the glass making an uncomfortable noise. The class heard it so they check but he left before anybody notice him. He heads to the school parking lot and begins to talk to himself. Bruce: Oh Tina you have change. You are a lot different now then in the past. He slams both of his arm on the car. I AM NOT GONNA GO AWAY THAT EASILY! For all my life I have always have love you. You and I are destine for each other and seeing each other after all those years prove that! I'm not gonna let you get away from me. |
Dec 27, 2012 7:58 PM
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| Chapter 4: As two days has gone by, Tina hasn't seen Bruce since then. When she walk through the streets, he didn't even make a quick appearance. She thought that he understand what she said. During the lunch period. Clowey: Hey you seem very trouble. Did something happen? Tina: Oh no its nothing. I just felt ease after what I did. I don't want to talk about. Mimi: Well Just remember that if you need any help, call us because we three are like the brave musketeers! Everybody begins to stare after that loud statemate. Tina: Ha Ha Ha ok I take that in mind( I don't know if you two couldn't even handle what I'm going threw). While they are talking, The popular Japanese boy Yuki comes up which stops the conversation admittedly. Yuki: Um can I sit here? Clowey: Oh sure. Hey Mimi I think I heard the bell ringing. Mimi: But we got only 15 min- Clowey grab Mimi and head out as fast as they could. Yuki: Hey I believe this is the first we met so Hi I'm Yuki. Tina: Oh umm hi. Said with a blush look.( I can't believe that he is talking to me.) But as Yuki sits on the chair, it suddenly broke which made him fall off and hit his head on the metal bar. Tina: Oh my god Yuki are you ok!? Yuki: Don't worry I'm fine. Luckily for me I have a metal cap place in my brain. Tina: But doesn't that increase damage? Yuki: Not if you get hit from the left side of the head. Tina: Glad you didn't got hurt very badly. Yuki: Don't worry. Its gonna take a lot more than this to hurt me. It is lucky that he didn't suffer to much damage, but she then notice something wrong with the chair as its missing a stance in between where it balance the chair. She has a bad feeling of how that happen. After lunch, Tina heads to her fifth period which happens to math and she is not hoping for it one bit it as Mr. Charles is a very mean teacher and has a mono tone voice that can put anyone to sleep. Tina: (Geez when is this class gonna end!) Mr. Charles: Hey you better be listening Tina! Saids with a mono tone voice Tina: Ya I am! Mr Charles: Oh really then repeat on what I have to say? Tina: Oh um…um..huh? Yuki: Here. Said in a whispered voice. Yuki shown her of what the teacher said in his notebook. Tina: We have to turn to pages 145 on our work books and solve problems number 23-25. Once you are done then turn to page 147 for the written part of the assignment. Mr Charles: Your actually listen for once. Tina: Thank you very much. Whispered Yuki: No problem. Whispered As they turn to their work, she notice something just sparkle behind her. She check and sees that it's a needle. She widen her eyes in shocked as she remember how it got there. When she sit down and thank Yuki. A needle pass by in high speed but didn't notice until now. Its starting to make her suspect that it might be him but just couldn't accept the fact that he would do this. By the end of the day, every student heads to their after school clubs or heads home. Tina wanted to talk to her friends about something. Tina: Hey can I ask you something? Clowey: Is something troubling you? Mimi: Is someone being mean to you! Tina: No its just that, what would you do if Suddenly she is interrupted when Yuki came by. Yuki: Hey. Tina: Oh hi. Clowey: Well I see that your moody additude is gone. Yuki: So I was wandering that if you want to walk together with me. My place isn't far away and I wanted to spend some time with you. Clowey: Take the offer. Whispered Tina: YES! Uh I mean sure. But the happy mood is come to a close quickly as a big rock knock Yuki on the left side of the head so hard that is cause him to bleed. Everybody begins panic when they see a student lying on the floor. Tina check where the rock is thrown and manage to get a glimpse of someone leaving the school when she sees the class window next to her. She heads there as quick as she can. But when she got there, he wasn't there but begins calling him on who he suspect. Tina: Bruce I know your out here! She constantly call out for him until he appears behind her. Bruce: Oh hey Ti- Tina: Don't hey me like everything is normal! Bruce: I see that you saw my attempts that I did. Tina: So it really was you! Said with a shocked voice He suddenly grabs hold of her arms and puts her on the wall. Bruce: Listen I want to make one point clear to you. He puts his mouth next to her ear. I won't accept any rejection and I'll make sure that no boy will ever take you away from me and if they do, I'll show them punishment they'll never forget. |
Dec 28, 2012 1:14 PM
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| Minor punctuational and spelling mistakes, overral good story... I dislike that you have written it mostly like a conversation (i.e 'Tina's Mom: Somethingsomething something. Tina: Somethingsomethingsomething' etc.) - you can make it more interesting if you add more (detailed) discription & don't add the speaker in the beggining of the sentance :) Pictures speak more than words,so try to 'paint' a picture with discription ^^ How was my critique? :D |
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Dec 28, 2012 2:19 PM
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pavli4ka8 said: Minor punctuational and spelling mistakes, overral good story... I dislike that you have written it mostly like a conversation (i.e 'Tina's Mom: Somethingsomething something. Tina: Somethingsomethingsomething' etc.) - you can make it more interesting if you add more (detailed) discription & don't add the speaker in the beggining of the sentance :) Pictures speak more than words,so try to 'paint' a picture with discription ^^ How was my critique? :D Good and cival. Thanks. Well usually its pretty much help me what is going on. I hope to add more descriptive detail with the character conversations. |
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Jan 2, 2013 3:23 AM
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| I already commented on your story once. atleast I should have *grins* |
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Jan 6, 2013 8:37 AM
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| The weekend has just started and while the incident left many student's surprise, that doesn't change the fact that they are ready for the weekend. While others are not bother with it and see it as how life can be ruff, it has a huge impact on Tina which is why she stays in her room laying on the bed and under the covers. Tina: I could not stop thinking of what he said to me. She starts to recap of what he said. Bruce: Listen I want to make one point clear to you. I won't accept any rejection and I'll make sure that no boy will ever take you away from me and if they do, I'll show them punishment they'll never forget. Tina: Is he really that in love with me that he'll do anything to keep me. I don't get it? What ever happen to the nice kind person who I always known. Takes a deep breath. Did something terrible happen that made him this way? Then a beeping sound came from her phone. She answers and sees that is Clowey on the line. Clowey: Tina are you still at home? Tina: No. Clowey: Tina don't think of this as you fault. It just happens to be...bad luck. Tina: Your terrible at making people feel better. Clowey: Come on nobody blames you for the crime and beside the doctors manage to heal his wounds. He'll be out by in a week so cheer up. Tina: Look you don't understand ok. I'm gonna hang up. Clowey: Ok but just try to cheer up before the weekend ok. I lied to Mimi that you are sick and if she finds out that your not, she will be very sad if you were a in a sad mood and I don't want to hear here horrid crying. Tina: Ok bye. Hangs up She hid herself under the covers again and tries to sleep but then hears her mother calling very excited Tina's Mom: Hey Tina we got a very important guess that you must meet! Tina: I don't care who it is, I just want to lay on my bed. Tina's Dad: Come down Tina as its someone who you have a close friendship with! So with the constent yelling from her mom and dad, she heads down stairs to see who it is. Tina: Ok I'm here so who is this- With one look of the person, She winden her eyes in shock. Bruce: Hey there Tina, its been a while since we met. Tina's Dad: Can you believe its him. After all those years he have never change. She didn't expect this to happen. Bruce who has a very dark personality, has hidden it with a very upbeat personality. It remind her of how he use to be but it is all an act to hide his real personality. She didn't want her parents to know whats his true emotions are so she pretend to be happy for seeing him. Tina's Mom: So Bruce you want stay for dinner? Bruce: Sure. Everything at the dinner table became a very settling atmosphere for Tina's parents. But Tina isn't fooled by him so easily. Tina's Dad: So Bruce how have you been since the last couple of years. Bruce: Oh I have been doing fine. I just bought a house next to the school and I just open a bar. When I saw Tina exiting the school, I thought I get to meet all of you after all those years that pass. Tina: Ya I thought I have seen you somewhere( You are full of crap!). Tina's Mom: Its been so long and I as well as the rest wanted to thank you for helping us back then when we are at our darkest hour. Bruce: Well lets just say that I did something that had to be done. Tina: Can you excuse me I'm gonna go use the bathroom. She head to the bathroom as she cant stand on what is happening. Tina: Damn him! How I hate it when he acts like that! Takes a deep breath. Ok let see how he likes it when I blow his cover. Just as she open the door, Bruce happens to be on the other side of the door. Tina: If you want to use the bathroom then be my guest. Bruce: I overheard what you said and I don't like it. Tina: I see that you heard of what I said. Well like it or not I'm going threw with it. But he refuse to move out of her way. Tina: Hey can you mo- He then grabs hold both of her arms. Tina: Hey what are you- Bruce: Listen to what I have to say. Smirk. Your not gonna tell them because I happen to be the only lover and you got. Just before you wonder why you didn't say anything at the table. I'll tell you why, you just can't see an old childhood friend in any danger. That decision you just made now about telling them is a lie you said to yourself. You are a very confuse girl just like before after what happen. Tina: Don't remind of that memory. Besides I'm not the weak girl I use to be. Bruce: Cute. Lets go of her. Let me give you the abridge version of what I said before. You are mine and I'll make sure of that. After that, Tina head to the front door to see that Bruce is about to get ready to leave. She uses this opportunity to tell them. Tina: Mom, dad can I tell you something. Tina's Mom: Sure what is it? Just as she is about to say it, she couldn't. For some reason she could not say a single word as if she has lost her voice. With a very long pause, she just cant. Tina: Never mind, I'll be heading to my room. Tina's Dad: I wonder what she was going to say? Bruce: I'm pretty sure it was nothing. Once in her room, she grabs a pillow to put on her face and begin screaming loud in anger. Tina: Takes deep breaths. I really don't get it. What do I see in him! Clenches her fists. It looks like that this will not end sooner than I hoped but I'm afraid of what he would do. |
Jan 9, 2013 5:06 PM
#9
| The weekend is over and everybody gets ready for school. Tina barley recover after what happened in the weekend but she didn't wanted her friends to know what happen so she kept it hidden from them. She make sure to hide her true emotions from being out to out in the open. Clowey: You see Mimi, Tina wasn't sad. She just got sick. Isn't that right(Please play along!) Tina: Ya I was sick, nothing more. Mimi: You should of told me so that I could of help you recover. We all stick together and never leave a friend behind. Tina: Ha ha ha sure (I don't know if you could do something and I'm afraid of what he would do to you if two try to help.). They all head in once the school bell ring but right as the school starts, there is a van with high tech equipment that parked in the school parking lot. As the door opens, A guy with the highest model camera steps out. Person: So this is where the crime scene is. I hope I could get some entertainment out of this case. He head to the main office and meet up with the principle and the other teachers. Ms. Just: So you must be Dan. Dan: Yep I'm here to take on the case. Ms. Just: Mr. Charles, make an announcement. Tell every student to come to the auditorium right now. Mr. Charles: Yes mam. Once the announcement is made. Every student from 9-12th grade head down. The place is pack with bunch of students that begin talking to each other like its not a care of the world. As Miss Just goes on stage and taps on the mike, everybody stops their conversations as the principle has a very scary voice when she yells. Ms. Just: Well it looks like I don't need to use my loud voice like last time. Ok the reason that I call you here is about that incident that happen last Friday. I have called some one that can find the culprit of who ever has done this to one of our students. Please introduce your self Dan. Dan: Hello there everybody. I'll make sure that I'll capture the culprit and make your school safe. Ms. Just: Ok thanks for the introduction. Now he'll be questioning the people that have witness the crime and I hope that everyone who is there has their full corporation. That is all I wanted to say. Student: Well this is a waste of time. Ms.Just: Waste of time? Student: Uhhh Ms.Just: Waste...of...TIME! After a whole bunch of yelling from the princible, all the students head back to their classes but they begin talking about Dan including her friend. Mimi: Dan is so awesome and I can't believe I saw him in person. This will be my story when I tell my grandchildren. Tina: Umm who is Dan by the way? Clowey: Well basically- Mimi: He is the awesome under cover reporter! He is known for solving cases that is too hard for the police to handle. He has everything that any undercover detective needs. High tech Equipment, very focus at his work, problem solving skills, and best of all, good looks! Clowey: Ya she happens to be a big fan. Tina: Ok thanks for telling me. I'll see you later then. ( I don't know why but I don't want Bruce to be caught by this guy. I still have that feeling that it is my fault that I didn't make it clear to him before he done those things. But why do I care? It looks like Bruce will have to learn it the hard way then. After all I think a good detention cell would get my point across.) But then she started to feel guilt for the rest of the school day. She couldn't focus on her work and started to feel queasy. Mimi: Hey are you ok? Tina: Ahhhhh! Mimi: I'll take that as a no? Tina: Oh sorry its just that threw out my last 4 classes, I could not focus and plus I ended up failing my assignments. Mimi: It could mean that something is bothering you. Tina: Wait Wait! I know where this is going. I guess there is no escape from it. Thanks Mimi Mimi: You welcome and what is the problem you facing? Do you need help? Tina: Don't worry its not a huge issue. I'll be fine. She hates to admit it but she wanted to warn him about the detective. She started to see some truth in the words he said to him when he visit her. So once school is over, she head to the bar that he mention before in the conversation of him and her parnets. Tina: I can't believe I'm doing this. Walking up the hill. So this is the bar that Bruce mention. Not what I expected? I always thought it would be more damp then this. Ok time to see if he is there anyway. She takes a little peek threw the window and see that its very livily. She never expected this much activity inside a bar. She opens the door and the activity stops for moment. Guessing they didn't expect a teen to be here of all places. Tina: Umm is anybody by the name of Bruce here? But then he gets hugged by Bruce himself which she punch him in the stomach Tina: Don't hug me. Bruce: Your punch is like a one way ticket to heaven. Ouch! Tina: Can I talk to you for a second. They both went outside. Tina: listen. Just to warn you, there is some one that you do not want to meet. So stay away from as far as possible ok. Bruce: That is very nice of you. Tina: Its not what you think as I'm using this as a way of saying "stay away from me." She heads home and Bruce goes back inside the bar. Claris: Hey who is that girl? Bruce: She happens to be a very special. |
Jan 9, 2013 5:08 PM
#10
| Dan begins to question all the people who witness the crime. So far, he didn't get any useful information. But there is one student left before he is done. Dan: Tell me. What did you saw when the event happen. Tina: Well all I saw was the rock hitting him hard. I'm sorry but that is all that I remember. Dan: I wish I could say "that is all and thank you for you corporation" but I got a feeling that you are keeping something from me. Tina: No I'm not! I swear on my behalf. Dan: Hmm? Alright. Thank you for you time. She leaves the van. Tina: I really hate myself but I just gonna hope I could at least make things better. Dan: Something tells me that she has something interesting in that mouth of hers. But first I need to check something. Dan decided to head to the crime scene and checks if there is any evidence found. Dan: Is this all you got. Cop: Yes. Unfortionly who ever did this, is really good in covering his tracks. The rock didn't show any prints which means he was wearing gloves and the position where he threw it didn't left any foot print so we are pretty much fruitless. Dan: Ok then. Without any answers, he thought he talk to the victim of the incident. He heads to the hospital where Yuki is. Dan: I'm here to visit Yuki. Office clerk: Oh sure you must be Dan. He is in the fifth floor. Once he got there, he sees that his parent are there as well. Dan: Hello there. Yuki's foster Mom: Who are you. Dan: Oh allow me to introduce myself. My name is Dan and I'm here to talk to your boy. Yuki's foster Dad: Are you here to question our son. Dan: Yes but I would like to speak with him in private. Yuki's foster Dad: Ok then. Lets go honey. The parents leaves the hospital room. Dan: Your foster parent are really nice. Yuki: Are you here to ask me about the incident. Sorry I don't have anything that is useful. Dan: It seems that this is bothering you. Yuki: Look I don't know who threw the rock so get out. Dan: Oh I see. The way you say your words means that this is not the only thing bothering you isnt it? Yuki: I SAID I DON'T HAVE ANYTHING USFUL TO SAY SO GET OUT! Dan: OK, OK. Dan heads out of the room. Dan: From the looks of that face, I can see that he really didn't have anything useful to say. Yuki's Fosters Dad: Were sorry. Dan: Oh you guys. Yuki's Foster Mom: Its just that he had a very rough childhood and he doesn't want to remember those memories at any cost. Dan: I'm guessing after what happen to him, it reminded him about something he wanted to forget. Yuki's Foster Dad: Yes. But know this, he is a good person. He never has any enemies and manage make friends with everyone he meets. Dan: Ok then. Well I leave, thank you. walks out. Hmmm? Well this is really starting to get complicated. It looks like I have only one lead left and its that girl. Time to pay her a visit then. Tina and her family spend their night playing a board game. The evening is going well for them as they are having much fun spending time together. But while all this is going on, they heard the doorbell. Tina's Mom: I'll get it. She opens the door and is Shock to see who it is. Tina's Mom: You, you, you, your. Dan: Dan. Tina's Mom: Come in, Come in. When Tina saw him, she isn't happy to see him. Tina's parents happens to be huge fans of Dan's work. Tina's Dad: Dan it is an honor to meet you. I as well as my wife have been big fans of you work since we were young adults. Dan: Well its nice to meet a fan. Tina stay quiet threw out when her parents are talking. She didn't want to stay any longer so she head to the kitchen with Dan noticing her. Tina: I need a drink. Dan: Seems like you have a very uncomfortable atmosphere back there? Tina: Hey I just wanted a drink of water. Dan: I know that you had something that is on your mind. Shall I say it has something to do with the incident. Tina: As I said before, I don't anything that happen there. I just witness what happen. Dan: Well I leave now. Oh and just to let you know once I find out who it is, I'll also find out who is involve as well and you don't want that right? smirk. Tina knows fully well on what he met. She goes up to her room and lays down on her stuff animals and begins thinking. Tina: I never understand what I'm doing. Damn it why am I confusing? Maybe my answer will come soon. As Dan walks to his car, he bumps into Bruce. Dan: Oh sorry there. Bruce: Oh sure. Oh by the way, try not to bother the family to much or else someone might think your stalking. Dan takes a pic of him. Dan: Just in case. Bruce: I see. Being honest might be your best and worst trait of you. He leaves. Dan takes a look at the pic he took. Dan: You a very interesting person. |
Jan 9, 2013 5:09 PM
#11
| Gender role reversal pt 1 As lunch time starts, Tina heads to the table where her friends sits. Tina: Hey there Clowey and Mi..mi? Mimi kept looking at the wall with his hand shape of a fist on her chin. Tina: Um what is she thinking about? Clowey: Well lets just say during our science class, we saw a movie about different Para well universes and she started to wonder if those exist. Tina: Oh ya I forgot that when ever she find something satisfying, she wonder if does exist or not. Clowey: Well it does make you think about it. Tina looks at the window and zooms in to the sky. Now in a different universe in the same place Tina lives only different. Tin: Today is a gonna be my kind of day and nobody is gonna ruin it. Tin is a boy who is just entering his junior year. He may look close like a girl but he is really a guy. Tin's Mom: Hey before you leave, how about some breakfast? Tin: That is ok. I'll eat at the school. Tin's Dad: Hey at least eat some toast. Tin: Ok. Tin grabs toast and leaves for school. As he walk, he comes to a crosswalk. As he waits for the walking signal, he notice a woman across the street where he is standing. He notice that she is looking at him but then the signal comes. Tin and the woman cross and went right past each other. Woman: I have finally found you. Tin: Huh? Tin look at the woman and ask her. Tin: Hey did you say something to me? The woman just left Tin: Hmm. Driver: Hey kid! Tin: Huh? Driver: Move out of the way! Tin: Oh sorry! Tin quickly gets out of the driver's way and heads to school. Woman: After all these years, I have finally found you my love. Tin heads to the front of the school and sees everybody hanging out with their group of friends. Tin looks for his friends. Tin: Where are they? Macky: TIN! Tin: Huh? Looks up. Wahhh! Tin sees him jumping off the roof and lands on him and begins hugging and rubbing his face from his. Macky: Tin its good to see you again! Tin: I'm happy to see you too but can you please get off of me! Clam: Macky! Macky: Ok. Clam: Hey there Tin, its been a while. Tin: Ya. These are the two twins, Macky and Clam. Macky is always the playful and cherry one like a little boy and Clam is always the more mature one. Tin had known them since the first day of summer break and since then, they became good friends. They heard the school bell ring so they head to their first period class. Clam: Hey Tin we just got some news that you will like. Tin: What do you mean? Macky: Well we heard that Yukari the Japanese exchange student has a interest in you. Tin: Oh really? blushes. That really- Just while they are walking threw the hallway, a shadowy figure appear which Tin notice. He turn quickly but nothing is there. Clam: Hey are you alright? Tin: Ya I'm fine. Come on lets get to class. For a moment Tin thought that he saw that woman again from before but just couldn't thought that was possible. Once the school day ended, Tin quickly head home. While running, he bump into someone causing them both to fall down. Tin: OW! Oh I'm sorry Mam, let me help you Woman: Oh that is ok. Tin: Oh you're the same woman from before. Gee this must be fate that I get to see a pretty woman. Woman: Yes and I guess its fate that brought the two destine lovers together. Tin: Huh? Suddenly the Woman hug him. Tin: Sorry but I don't know who you are. You must of confuse me with someone else. The woman slowly back away and shows a very sad but sadistic face. Woman: Perhaps this would jog your memory. She gave him a kiss in the mouth which Tin is surprise by. Tin: Hey what was that!? Woman: Don't you remember me? Tin takes a good look at her and notice who she really is. Tin: Wait is that you Briyana? Briyana: So you finally figure out. |
Jan 26, 2013 6:59 AM
#12
| For a while, Tina just couldn’t focus as much as before as now she has two people that would bother her which is Bruce and Dan. One showing his love while the other is solving a case. This lead to her not being able to concentrate much on her work which result into her grades falling a bit. Ms. Jeremy: Tina wake up! Tina: Oh sorry I wasn’t sleeping, I was just laying down. Ms. Jeremy: Well I’m here to say that your grades are going downhill lately. May I ask what is going on. Is there something that is bothering you? Tina: Sorry its just that I’m not feeling well. Ms. Jeremy: Do you need to go home? Tina: No that is ok. I get into catching up on my work. She didn’t want to tell him so she does what ever she can to hide it. Once lunch started, after Tina gets her lunch, she notice a crowd of girls at the lunch room entrance. She wonder what is the commotion. She got a closer look and notice that Yuki is at the Center. She didn’t want to confront him as she still thought it was her fault that he was sent to the hospital so she decided to stay out of sight. Unfortionly Yuki spots her among the crowd. Yuki: Tina! Tina wanted to ignore him but just couldn’t. Tina: Oh Yuki I see you got out of the hospital. Yuki: Ya lets just say its boring being there all day. Tina: Listen I’m very sor- Yuki: Its Ok as I don’t blame you for what happen so you don’t need to worry. She felt very relive to hear that. Its like a gust of wind threw a hot day. Yuki: Listen Tina just to let you know that I will find out who did this and when I do, I’ll make them pay. Tina wanted to think that is something what guys would say to impress girls but the way he said it, just sounded so serious. Its to the point where she feels that he is not talking to the Yuki she knows. Yuki: Is there something wrong? Tina: Oh no. Well I’ll see you later then. Yuki: Grabs her by the shoulder. Wait Tina: Oh! Yuki: Look I was wondering that do you want to hang out some time? Tina: Well this is unexpected. Umm sure. Yuki: Ok. With that, she is able to stay focus threw out the entire day. She is very relieve and pretty happy. But once school ends for the day, she is reminded herself about Bruce and Dan which made her feel stress. Unfortionly he gets to see both of them today. Dan: Hello there Tina. Tina: (Just ignore him and walk away) He keeps barging in front of her. Dan: You know its very suspicions if you don’t answer question of a investigator. Tina: Look as I said before I don’t have anything useful- Bruce: I think its best if you take what the girl said. Tina: (Oh crap I didn’t expect you to come here!) Dan: Well hello there. Bruce: Go home Tina. I want to talk to him for a moment. Dan: Ya I have the same thought. Tina decided to take Bruce’s words and leaves. She has a very bad feeling that things won’t go as well as he hope. Dan: So tell me why are you so fixated to that girl? Bruce: I believe that is more of a personal matter. Dan: Maybe its because she does knows who have committed the crime and I would guess she is to afraid to admit it because she is threatened? Bruce: If you think I was endangering her then you are wrong. I would never do that to a very important person. Dan: You way of speaking is really is odd to me. It kinda reminds me of someone I know. Bruce: Well I should be going now. He leaves. Dan head backs to his Van but sees Yuki next to it. Dan: Hey there Yuki. Do you need something? Yuki: Listen about before. I was wrong as I do have something that might be useful for you. smirk. |
Mar 26, 2013 5:06 PM
#13
| Tina walks home from school after its over. She stop for a moment and begins to think of what to do. The more she thought about, the more it hurts. Tina: My head is in such of deep thought. Maybe working on some homework could get my mind of it. Tina continues walking but then she bumps into someone, knocking her down. Tina: Ow. Oh I’m very sorry- As she looks at him, she recognize him quickly. He turn out to be that old man. Hank who he tried to sexually assaulted her when she was in middle school. This only made her remember of what happen which she tries to so hard to forget. Tina stands backs and gets ready to defend herself but Hank falls flat to the ground knocked out. She notice that he has a lot of bruising. Out of sympathy, she decide to help him. With a single call, the ambulance came. Hank: Ugh. Ambulance person: Don’t move much Ok. Just lay and rest. As they put him in the ambulance, Dan happens to be there. Dan: I see that the sexual predator is doing well. Tina: You know him? Dan: I remember him being the most dangerous back in the early days of my career. I was the only person to get deep into his mind on how he works and was able to get him to rehab. If my memory is right, you were the victim. Tina: Ok are you stalking me? Dan: Well you can say that but I’m here to ask you if you had any info on the man named Bruce as when I was talking to Hank, he told me that he was attack by a man who has black and has red color eyes and that happens to match him. Tina stay silent. Dan: What you not gonna tell me? Tina: Look I don’t know anything about him. Dan: Man you are one confusing girl. I can’t even tell if you saying the truth or not because of your choice of words. Anyway looks like you don’t feel like talking so I leave you alone for now. But the next time we meet, will be the moment when I solve this crime. As he walks away, she started to feel down herself. Her mind is in chaos as many thoughts starts to come up. She started walking back to her home and to her surprise, she saw Yuki there. Tina: Yuki? Yuki: What? Your not happy to see me? Tina: No its just that I didn’t expect to see you here. Yuki: Well I like to surprise the girl that I like. Tina: Blushes. Ok that is a little to much information there don’t you think. Yuki: Really? Because don’t you have something that is wanting to come out of you? Tina changes the expression of her face. Tina: What do you mean by that? Yuki: Well its just that I thought you be one of those people who like the truth to come out. Tina: Yuki your really starting to weird me out. Yuki: Bites his lips. Please don’t say that word. Well it seems that I’ll have some work to do. I’ll see you later then. For some reason she felt so scared and this is coming from Yuki who she always knows that he is a calm and friendly person. The thought of him being dangerous just cross her mind but she cant see that. After all that is happen today, she went directly home and decided to sleep early and ignore her homework. As Yuki walks down the street, he met up with Dan. Dan: So Yuki do you got something that is useful for me in the investigation? Yuki: I just found out that Tina knows who did this to me. Dan: Ok how would you know that? I tried talking to the girl and so far she is pretty hard to read. Yuki: Well when you see a person who might have something important, you can pretty much open them like a book and it makes it easy if they are a woman. Dan: ( Boy does he sound sexist. But it seems that he is very sure about this but when looking at his face, I get a strange feeling that something really bad about to happen.) Tina begins sleeping like a log. But when its about midnight, she started to shake around as she is having a nightmare. It takes place at the nurses office in her school. She was there with her spread out and she saw Yuki close to her. But she looks down and sees that she got stab with a knife. She look to the left and see Bruce all shocked. Yuki: You should of never have done that. After that she have woken up. She looks at her clock and sees that is 6:00 a.m, only an hour and a half before she has to get ready to school. Tina: What a nightmare? But what is odd is that it felt so real. What does this mean? |
May 16, 2013 6:40 PM
#14
| Tina barley can stay focus after that nightmare she have. She couldn’t stay awake which cause her trouble in her math class. Tina: *Snoring* Mr. Charles: Are you enjoying you nap Tina? Yuki: Tina wake up! Tina: huh what? Mr. Charles: Go to the principle office. Tina: Damn it. She heads to the principle office and there he has a talk with Ms. Just. Ms. Just: Tell me is there is something bothering you? Tina: *Snores* Ms. Just: *Snaps her fingers* Wake up. Tina: Oh uh sorry about that. Its just that I haven’t gotten any sleep and so I’m like this. Ms. Just: Something is bothering you isn’t it? Tina: No nothing is bother me. Ms. Just: Your lying. Tell me what is on you mind? Tina: Well you see, I just having trouble with this one person as he sorta act like…Shall I say a scary person to be with. I knew him back when we were young but now he just act like someone else that is not the same anymore. But I can’t just abandoned him as he is a friend I do that. Ms. Just: I see. I think I know what you are going threw. It seems that you are having trouble relating to your friend of how he is right now. Trust me I know how that feels. Tina: Then you can see what I have been going threw and I don’t know what to do. Ms. Just: Let me give this advise. Try to help them threw their time of need. It could be that they are hiding something inside which might be the cause of their change in personality. Hope this makes you feel any better. Tina: Ya a little. Ms. Just: Just make sure you get some sleep this time ok. With that, she heads back to her math class. Mr. Charles: I hope we wont get into more predetermines this time. Tina: Yes I promise( Mean ass!). *She sits down* Yuki: So did the principal lay a big one on you. Tina: No in fact she kind of gave me some advice on what I was going threw at the moment. Yuki: Having trouble with a friend? Tina: Well sort of. Yuki: *smiles* I hope you two handle your problems. Tina: Ok. Yuki: Oh and also I was wondering. Tina: Yes? Mr. Charles: You Two! They both look at the teacher. Mr. Charles: Am I interrupting something? If I am then I could sent you two to wait on the hallway while I right referrals. Both: No sir! Once after class is over, Tina heads to the entrance where he meets Yuki. Tina: So what is that you really wanted to tell me? Yuki: I was wondering. Would you like to hang out with me at the school cultural festival this Saturday? Tina: *Blushes* Oh umm. Yuki: Its ok if you say no but I thought that maybe you don’t have anything to do this Saturday and I thought. Tina: Sure I would love to come. Yuki: That is great. I’ll pick you up at 12:00. See you then. Tina crack a smile. She feels over joy that the boy he likes is asking him out. As she walk home, she expected to meet Bruce along the way. But however she is way off as once she got back home she see’s not only Bruce but Dan at her house. Tina: ( Are you freaking kidding me!) Bruce: Oh hey there Tina. I got to say your Mom really makes some great enchilada’s. Dan: I agree. Tina: Mom Can I ask why Dan is here!? I can understand why Bruce is here by why him!? Tina’s Dad: He was hungry so I invited him. Tina: ( Dad I swear you are just too nice to people, especially when you meet celebrities.) Tina’s Mom: Come sit down and eat with us. There is plenty more around. Tina: I’m not hungry today. I’ll be at my room. *She heads to her room* Tina’s Mom: Oh I hope we didn’t upsets her. Bruce: I’ll go cheer her up. Tina’s Mom: Thanks Bruce. Bruce heads up to Tina’s room. Bruce: *Knocks* Tina: Go away! Bruce: Oh come on. Don’t you want to talk your man. Tina: Very funny! Bruce: Fine be that way as I will eat your dinner. Tina: Go ahead. As I said before I’m not hun-*grumble* Bruce: It seems that your stomach disagrees. Tina: *Opens door* Give me it. Bruce: It seems you are happy. Tina: What makes you say that?…( Damn! Don’t tell me he is good at reading peoples emotions!?) Bruce: I see what it is. Just gonna remind you one thing. No matter if you hit it off with that someone you think is special, you might be wrong on that. Tina: Please just go away. Bruce: Well I see ya later. As Bruce exit out of the house, Dan begins to follow him. Bruce: You know I do get annoyed when you follow me all the time. Dan: Well you know me as I always keep and eye out as you never know what might happen. Bruce: Well there is a big difference of trying to get evidence and stalking. Dan: Well I guess I’ll leave you alone for now. But knowing you, I hope that the next time we meet, I get to see you as the real person you are. Bruce: Can’t wait to see your disappointment on that. As Bruce leaves, Dan heads back to his van and as he suspects, Yuki is there as well. Yuki: So did you got what you were looking for. Dan: Unfortionly no. Not yet which is really frustrating me. Yuki: Don’t worry as I think we got the proof we need. Dan: Ok I’m really don’t like how a teenager is doing half my work. Yuki: Don’t worry as I’ll give all the credit for this one. Coffee? At about 9:00 Tina dress up in her favorite pajamas of her favorite Cartoon character Jerry from Adventure Jerry and begins to sleep. So far she is in a deep relaxing sleep until a few hours later. *Dream* She sees herself at the school nurse office but their she notice two people in front of her. One who is down on floor all beat up and scared. The other heads right towards her. She steps back but then the person puts out both of his arm and grabs her by the throat. She desperately struggles to break free but as she gets a closer to who is grabbing her, she widen her eyes in shock as she got a clear look of the face before she woke up. She looks at her clock and sees that its 1:00 am. She now couldn’t fall to sleep now since after how the nightmare change. |
Jul 11, 2013 11:10 AM
#15
| The nightmare kept Tina up most of the night. As the sun comes over the horizon, it hurts her baggy eyes. It’s lucky for her that today starts her early weekend. However she doesn't think that as she couldn't stop thinking about the dream she had. She gets out of bed went to wash her face. Tina: Dammit that stupid dream. It keeps bugging me and this one shows me something really shocking. It probably doesn’t mean anything. She then takes a warm shower to refresh herself. After putting on her bathrobe, she descends the staircase and finds that she’s home alone. Tina: Guess mom and dad went to work. *Doorbell rings*. I’m coming. * heads to the door and opens it* Bruce: Hey there Ti- *Slams door* what you’re not happy to see me? Tina: Go Away! Bruce: Is it because you're still in your bathrobe? Are you embarrassed? Tina: Go Away pervert! Bruce: Not until I talk to you. Tina: *Groan* *Takes a deep breath* Fine! Just wait as I need to put on some clothes. Bruce: Fine I’ll wait. But I wouldn't mind looking at you in a bathrobe. Tina: How about I call the police if you try to barge in? She picks out some sweats and lets him inside as much as she deeply regrets it. He walks over to the couch and sits down. Tina: Ok this better be something important because I don’t want to waste my time. Also don’t you dare try to “put the moves on me” as you can see I have a taser and I’m not afraid to use. Bruce: Tell me what’s bothering you? Tina: Really? Right now it’s YOU! Bruce: I can see it in your eyes. Tell me what’s wrong? Tina: I just couldn't sleep that’s all. It’s not something to worry about so just please leave. She maneuvers him out of the door bluffing with the taser and attempts to slam the door in his face. Bruce: *Blocks the door with his foot* I don't like it when you lie to me. I thought we we’re clear that we speak what’s on our mind since I was a teenager and you were no younger than a child. Tina: Were not kids anymore! Please just leave. Bruce: Fine but I will say this. I expect something big to happen by tomorrow and you’ll see some things that you’ll never expect. Tina: Stop talking like you know me! Bruce: I hope your date ends well. With that he leaves. Tina lies on the couch and begins to think of what he’s going to do. Tina: Damn it! What am I’m going to do? *Looks at her hands* No I won't let this get the best of me. Besides the nightmare is only a figment of my imagination nothing more. Tomorrow I'll enjoy my time with Yuki. Bruce walks to his home but as he reaches the front door, he notices that the door is slightly ajar when he was sure he locked it. He cautiously enters his house to take a look around. He scans the room and finds Dan in his leather chair. Bruce: Well I didn't expect you to show up here. Dan: Ugh. Bruce don’t come any closer. Something’s wrong he quickly notices, but it was too late as Yuki hits him with a rock, bull’s-eye at his face. Yuki: Oh Bruce. You think you can get away with what you've done. But the thing is, when a crime’s committed the victim never forgets, especially when you scar them. I’m not gonna let you ruin my life again. This time I’ll make your life like hell. Starting with what’s most precious to you: Tina. As night falls Tina heads to bed. She’s having the same nightmare only except its much clearer. She takes a look around and notices she’s in her school hallway. She checks out the windows and sees everybody enjoying their time at the fair. All of a sudden she heard heavy footsteps coming closer. As she turns around, she sees him along with Bruce and Dan on the floor there’s blood. She tries to run away but it seems that he keeps catching up with her. She enters the nearest door which happens to be the nurse’s office. The person starts to slam into the door and bust it down. She throws a punch at his face but he blocks it. He forms a fist and punches her in the stomach and begins strangling her. She can't break free and before she reaches her last breath, a shine of light came and with that, it wakes her up but this time its daytime, she made it through the nite. Tina: Well that was different. What does it mean exactly? Well at least I got sleep *takes a look at her alarm clock* only three hours before the school fair starts. I better get myself ready. As three hours fly by, she gets herself prepared with the nicest clothes possible. A long skirt with flower designs of white daisies along with a blue silk shirt and a cream jacket. Tina: I don't know if Yuki will like this but it’s worth a shot. *Looks at the clock* Oh it’s almost 12:00 I need to go. *heads downstairs* I’m heading to the fair mom! Tina’s Mom: Ok. Just be sure to be back once it’s over, ok? She exits the house and heads to the school and as expected, it’s very crowded with people having fun with the games and enjoying the food. Clowey: Tina! Mimi: TINA! *Runs and hugs her* Tina: Hey there you guys. Mimi: Look at you. Now that will get Yuki’s attention. Clowey: And speaking of him, there he is now. Well see you later then. Come on Mimi. Mimi: Tell us every little detail once it’s over! She heads to Yuki who is very happy to see her. Yuki: Hey there Tina. You look very nice. Tina: Thanks. Yuki: He listen um why don’t we go inside the school, I want to show you something. Tina: Um how about we just go and enjoy the games. I know what I’m going to say may sound crazy but I feel like something bad is going to happen if we head there. Yuki: Oh okay. Well ok but first I’m gonna go get something out of my locker so wait here. Tina patiently waits for him to get back but it seems that it’s taking much longer than it should be. She didn't want to go in after him but she decided to give a quick check. Inside she goes to where his locker is but he wasn't there. She checks out the window where everybody is having fun. Her eyes widen in shocked as it’s the exact same way her nightmare went. She’s too afraid to turn around but seeing a mirror, she sees the reflection of someone who’s happy and wielding a fire ax. |
Nov 7, 2013 2:08 PM
#16
| She is very afraid to turn around. He raises his ax and swings at her but she dodge it. She landed on the school hallway floor and as she take a good look, she widen her eyes in shock to see that is was Yuki who the ax holding maniac. Yuki: Hello there. *Saids in a cynical voice* As she is surprised to see him this way, she could not speak one word about it. Yuki: Oh Tina. It seems that your surprise on what you are seeing here. Well then. Shall I end it for you? He raises the ax and swing at her. She dodge it and started to run and never stops. Taking a left turn at the hallway and takes the nearest stairs to the bottom floor. She stops to take a breath but she then hears footsteps and its getting close. She heads to the nearest classroom and hides behind the door. She lay down on the floor closing herself up in fear. But just then, she heard footsteps coming from the hallways. Breathing heavily, she tried to stay quiet as possible when hearing those steps coming from the hall. It stop. Taken a deep quiet breath to calm herself down, a ax breaks thru the door. She immediately head to the other classroom door and exit out of there with Yuki giving chase. Once up there, she head to the infirmary and block the door with the mattress in the room. But that doesn’t stop him from breaking thru the door. Every time he swing it get close to him coming in. In desperate panic, she heads to the file cabinet and grabs a alcohol bottle. Yuki breaks in and once he sees her, he heads to her with a psychotic look in his face raising the ax behind his back. At that moment she threw the alcohol on his face. Some of it got on his eyes which cause him to drop the ax and scream in pain. Tina: Its not over yet! She jumps in air and raises her foot, hitting him in the face and on to the ground hard. She grabs the ax and raise it up in the air as Yuki wipes out the alcohol on his face. Tina: Please don’t make me do this! Showing a very scared expression on her face, he couldn’t help but chuckle a bit. Yuki: You wouldn’t dare hurt me. *Makes a deep grin* Tina: No. I wouldn’t dare hurt you as much I did. She throws the ax over him with a disappointed look on her face. Tina: I don’t want to see your face again or else I report this to the cops. With that, she heads out of the door but then both of his hands grabs her by the mouth and neck and is pull back in the infirmary. A struggle begins to happen with Tina trying to break free in Yuki’s grasp. During this, a teen who is eating a piece of carrot cake when he stops eating it as he saw what is at the window where the infirmary is. He drops the cake and heads to tell everybody. During this, Yuki had enough and began strangling her. Just like in her dream, its the exact position that she is in. The nightmare that she had came true and thought it was the end here. Seeing that she is in the same position in her dream, she thought it was over. But then a shadow appear behind. With one look, she immediately recognize who it is. Yuki took a look and the first thing he sees is a fist to the face. He lets go of her and landed on the wall. Yuki: Never thought you be here right now. Bruce: Do you honestly think that Knocking me out hard will kill me. Yuki: I wasn’t at first but now since you’re here. *Looks at Tina with a deep grin.* Now you’ll get to see what you’ll loose in front of you own eyes. He puts his hand inside the pocket of his black jacket and pull out a knife. With it, he charge right at her direction. Being shocked about, she didn’t move an inch. But then Bruce came in her way and took the stab for him. It hit him in the stomach which started to bleed heavily. Tina: Bruce! Bruce: Don’t worry I’m fine. Tina: That is not fine! Bruce: Please. I have been threw more body damage then this. *Makes a mean look.* Now I’m done with you! With that, he punches him in the faces which made him slam on the wall and fall slowly to the floor. Bruce takes a sit at one of the hospital beds and before Tina could thank him, a bunch of students and teachers came in and saw what has happen. After a while the police came in and took him away with the entire crowd shock that he would do something vile. At the same time, Bruce is sent to the hospital. That day will be something she would never forget no matter how her friends try to cheer her up and forget. About a week has a past since that day and everybody went to their normal lives. But Tina couldn’t help but feel sorry about what happen. Once school is over, she headed to Bruce’s house as he was scheduled to come back today. Tina took a long look and tries to go in but just can’t. She quickly left the property but threw second floor window, Bruce is watching from distance with a disappointed face but soon made a deep smile afterward. |
Nov 13, 2013 2:44 PM
#17
| After an experience like that, Tina decided to stay home for once. Luckily for her, the principle insist on it as a way to get some rest after what she is been threw. She is very sad for what has a happen. The fact that she miss all the signs and getting Bruce to the hospital, she couldn’t let go of that feeling that it was her fault. She lied on her bed covering herself with some of her stuff animal friends. Just as she close her eyes to sleep, she hears knock on her door. Tina: Go away Mom and Dad. I just want to be left alone. Tina’s Mom: But there is someone here who wants to see you. She gets out of the cover and heads to the door as fast as she could. Once she opens the doors, she makes a confuse look when she saw a person who he never seen. Tina’s Dad: This guy Happens to be Bruce’s best friend and he wants to talk to you. Claris: Hello there. Tina: Fine! Come in. Tina’s Mom: We’ll go downstairs and get you something to drink. Claris: That would be lovely. The two head down while Claris and Tina sits down on the bed. Tina: Can ask who are you and please don’t tell me you’re not gonna confess your love for me because one is challenge and two is too many. Claris: I wish I could but I’m happily married. Tina: I wasn’t joking. Claris: Oh kids these day. Tina: I’m serious! Claris: Well perhaps I should introduce my self. My name is Claris and happen to be one of Bruce’s right hand man. Tina: Figures. I knew all those people at the bar will have some liking to him. Claris: Does include you as well. I know about the history of you two. Tina: Anyway what do you want? Claris: I’m here on Bruce’s behalf. He wish he could come here and comfort you but do to his injury, I took his place. Tina: Well its his fault anyway! Claris: His Fault for what? Protecting you from a fatal injury that you might get killed from. I sometimes wonder why he likes you. Without doubt he does have a point. I don’t know how the outcome would be if I get hurt in his place. Claris: I can tell one thing. He would never blame you no matter how much trouble you have cause. Tina: Wait since when did I ever got in trouble! *Makes a frustrating face* Claris: Well he did tell me stories of when you are just a child who get him in a lot of predicaments like that- Tina: NO DON’T SAY IT! Claris: Ok Ok. It isn’t long until Tina’s Mom came two glasses of orange juice. Tina’s Mom: Here it is. Claris: Thanks but I think I’ll take my leave. I have to get somewhere. With the look of his face, she knew what it was saying. After a while she gets dress up. Putting on a red shirt with a bunny face and blue pants. Tina: I have no idea if he wants to see me but I guess its worth a shot. But even if he doesn’t forgive why should I care. I better just get this over it. With that said, she immediately head out. She got to the house and is afraid to get any closer. But her stubbornness got the better of her and head in without any care. She took a knock on the door but no answer. Like anybody would she knock again but the door open a little. Tina: The door open. Wait now I know what is he doing. Well I better just see if he is ok or not and I’LL LEAVE OK! With caution, she enter the door and for the first time she sees what is inside his house. The living room. There are two wide couches along with a chair in the middle. There is a fireplace in side of the wall along with photos. There is even a desk that seems to be made with the finest wood along with a soft carpet floor that has a deep red shading. Tina: Wow I never thought he live in this luxury?…Oh what do we have here. She notice the photos at the fire place. Each photos seems to be him as certain ages and with some family members. She takes a closer look at first Picture which is him as a 3 year old boy with two people beside him which she quickly remember who one of them is. Tina: Oh ya I remember her. What was her name?…Ah its Linda! I hope she is not like his brother. But I wonder who is the other one? I haven’t met him so I guess this must be his brother. Maybe I should ask him that. The next picture is him in a suit with his an older man and woman. Tina: I’m guessing these two might of be his parents. Its odd that he never introduce us. Wonder why? The last one is him with a girl who has her arms around him but however he doesn’t look happy about it. Tina: Wait this Bruce had a girlfriend before!? Oh god I think I feel sick as I just realise I might of been cheating at a young age. I really hope not. Bruce: Like what you saw? She turns her head to see that he is behind him in his pajamas. Having gym pants and a green shirt. Tina: Oh I see that you’re up Bruce: Not exactly. He drops down on his knees. Tina: Bruce are you O.K? Bruce: I’m a little fine. Still felt a little pain after taking that hit. Tina: You haven’t been moving too much have you? Bruce: Well I have. Tina: You’re an idiot. Let me take to your bed. Bruce: it will be my honor. Tina: Shut up and don’t you dare do anything funny or else I open up that wound of yours! She picks him up and heads to his bedroom that is located upstairs. It looks just like any other bedroom with the simplicity. A normal bed, a alarm clock, some drawers. The simple stuff. Tina: Ok now just stay there until you have the strength to stand up. Bruce: Didn’t thought you care so much about me. Tina: I don’t but I didn’t wanted you to get hurt or killed. That would just make me be like a bad person. Beside I came here to apologize. Bruce: You still feel bad after what happen. I thought I said that it wasn’t your fault. After all, I’m pretty much the blame. I let him get the better of me as well. Tina: Ya but I feel that I deserve that stab to the stomach then you. Just seeing you taking that hit. Bruce: Hey I deserve it. Beside I couldn’t bare if you get hurt in anyway. Just the thought of you actually dieing. Just the thought of it made it scary. Tina: *Makes a sad face.* Got to admit, that got to me. But then a thought come to her that he wanted to ask. Tina: Hey I got to ask. Is any of your family know about the condition you are. What about the girl that- But at a sudden moment, she gets grab by the arm and pulls her on the bed. In a very surprising position of her being at the bottom and Bruce being at the top. In anyway she would fight back but something is keeping her from doing so. Bruce: *Smile.* I know what you are thinking. You probably hoping that I will do those things. You know why?… Because you want me too. But However I just can’t as there is also a part you thinking this wrong on so many levels. Which bothers me to no end. I’ll wait little longer until you get it straight. With that, he let her go but she tremble and fear and push herself back away from him. A silence glare is made between them for a moment. Tina: Umm I gotta go. Without hesitation she left the room, not giving a single look. She heads out of the house and slam the door upon exiting. Tina: What the hell was that! Why would I let him get away with this! *Takes a deep breath.* Whatever he just said is just bullcrap. I really regret visiting him now if he is gonna act like that. I need a rest after this. She quickly head to her house as fast as she could without realizing that Bruce is watching her leave from the window with a smile. |
Nov 18, 2013 9:43 PM
#18
| At the downtown train station, it as crowded as it could get during the rush hour. Many different kinds of people heads to their destinations as quickly as possible. A train happens to stop at about 12:00pm. Once the door open, many people come out as well as coming in at the same time. One woman who is wearing peach color shorts, a summer shirt revealing a bit of her bust and a hat saying “Screw you! I say what I want!” She has blonde hair and a nice curvy body with a face that just attracts certain mens interest. Woman: Well its been awhile since I left this city. I wonder if he is here? We then cut to Tina spending time with her family in a flea market that just open up. Her parents happen to be into a bit of bargain hunting. Unfortunately for her, she finds it kind of boring as all the parents does is looking at products and talk about how good it would be if they have it. It just boards her to no end. Tina: Um mom can I go check what they have at the cloths section. Tina’s Mom: Sure. Just pick out clothes that are very cheap ok. Tina: Ya sure. But little do they know, she rather go to the game booth with the money that she save for this moment, knowing how her parents takes so long to look at products. But once she heads to the game, she sees a fight has been broken out. Heads in to take a closer look and notice a woman in a circle of men and other women as well. Main women: Come on you guys, can’t we just talk this over. Women 1: NO! You hurt my poor wubby kins and you're gonna pay! Main women: Oh please. He touch my ass so I touch his face with my fist. Women 1: Your lying! Man 1: I’m gonna make you eat those words! He charges in for a punch in the face but at a split second, she dodges it and knock him to one of the game booths. Game booth owner: HEY WATCH IT! The rest charges in a circle formation but then Tina interrupts the fight when knocking out the women in the center. Tina: Hey there how is going? Women 2: WHAT THE HELL! Tina: I think I got them scared don’t you think? Main Women: I Like you style. Man 3: Get the two bitches! The rest begin to throw a bunch of punches and kicks. Main Women: So tell me why are you helping. Tina: Well from what I have seen- Main Women: Look out. She grabs the fist of an upcoming attack made by one of the female fighters. She pulls back her head and with full force, knocks her out with a head butt. Darla: By the way. My name is Darla. Tina: I’m Tina. Its to meet you. *Punches a woman in the face.* The two finish off the rest. The result is the two surround by a bunch of people who are knock down. Darla: Well that should be enough. *Picks the woman up.* Now You pick up your wubby whatever you call that perv and leave! Woman: *Whimper* Ok! With that, he takes his man and left. Tina’s Parents: TINA! She made a face of worry and turns around slowly. Tina: Yes. Tina’s Dad: You started a fight again. Tina: No No! *Waves both hands back and fourth.* You see I was helping a person name Darla who is right- But as she points to where she is at. She was gone. Tina: Umm there isn’t any slight chance you’ll believe me right? Both of them shakes their head. Tina puts her head down after taken a deep breath. The next day at school, during lunch time, she sat with her friends. Clowey: Oh hey Tina! There is a carnival that is opening this weekend. You want to come? Tina: Wish I could but I have to help my parents with chores do to the fact I got involve with a fight. Mimi: YOU GOT INTO A FIGHT!? Tina: Hey not so loud! Yes I got into a fight. But I have a reason. I was helping this woman who got into a predicament. Disappeared before I could tell my parents about it and that is how I got in trouble. I swear when I find that women I’m gonna teach her a lesson! Mimi: She is a big Meanie! Tina: But you know something? When I first saw her. I swear I seen her somewhere but what would that be? Mimi: Maybe she might be a friend you have forgotten. How could you forget! Tina: No no I haven’t met her at all but I get the feeling I seen her in some shape or form? Clowey: Well if you believe in fate she might be someone that might get involve in your life. Tina: Why do I get the feeling that is gonna bite me in the ass? Mimi: Butt. But why would you think that? Tina: I don’t know but I just don’t want to talk about it. Lets just eat our lunch and head to the libary after this ok. They finish lunch without saying another word. Once they are done, they head to the library. They all sign in and use the computer to surf for in the web. Tina couldn’t care less on what she click on. But however one link peeks her interest. The link she saw said “Darla next heir to the family.” Now she just thought it was another person that happens to be name Darla but out of curiosity she click on it. It took her to a website called “Knowing the celebs.com” and what she found is something that not only peek her interest, but thought it was impossible. There is picture of the same girl she has just met. Tina: (No this can’t be possible!?) She scroll down to see and with all the picture shown, she can confirm its her. Tina: (THIS GIRL IS SPECIAL!) Mimi: Your checking her page? Tina: Do you know this person. Mimi: Of course! She is famous actor that started when she was 14 years old. Right now she is playing as a my favorite character in a drama called Firefly which started a women who falls in love with a demon. Tina: Oh I see(So I met a celebrity! That is something I never expected) Mimi: If you looked down you even get to see the list of movies she has played. I show you. She grabs the mouse and scroll down to see the list of movies she has play in. But a pic of her and someone pass by. Tina: Wait stop! Mimi: Hmm? Tina: What is that? Mimi: You mean this picture right here? That is here when she was younger and with somebody. I heard it didn’t go well. Tina: Oh I see(I don’t believe it! Its the same photo I saw when I went to Bruce’s house!). Before they could check more info about her, the bell rings. Clowey: Well its time for class. Lets go you two. Mimi: Coming. Tina: O.K The thought of her meeting a celebrity is one thing. But to think that what she thought before when she saw that picture is true. It just made her feel a little sick. Once school ends, she quickly head home as fast as she could. She didn’t want to see Bruce as it would be awkward now that she knows something about him. But luck isn’t on her side as he is waiting one block away from her house. She takes another path to go around head at the back yard but bumps into someone. Tina: Oh sorry about- Darla: Oh hey there again. Tina: YOU! Darla: What? Your not happy to see me? Tina: Of course not! You got me in trouble you idiot! Darla: Sorry about that. I was in a hurry. Tina: Well I don’t have time to talk to you mister celeb. Darla: Oh you notice who I am. Want an autograph? Tina: NO! She heads back and doesn’t give the slightest care if she bumps into him but when she head to the pathway she always take to her house, he was gone. Tina: Huh? Where did he go? Darla: Where did who go? Tina: You're still here? Darla: Say what if I clear up your mess. Tina: Meaning? Darla: How about I come to your house for a visit. Tina: Oh no! You can just go away and- Darla: Great! Lets go. Tina: Wait! Ugh. Darla puts her arm on her and push her to her house. But at a distance, Bruce happens to be watching them. Bruce: Damn it! Not her. I really don’t want to talk to that bitch again. It seems that I’m gonna have to stay low for a while. Tina you won’t be able to see your prince so hold on o.k? He leaves the area as soon as he can. |
Nov 24, 2013 6:40 PM
#19
| Once they enter the house, her parents have made a very shocking and excited face. Just as she suspected, her parents know’s her and are big fans of her. Tina’s Dad: Its a pleasure to meet you Darla Darla: Awww thank you. *Smiles.* Tina’s Dad: Can you please sign my T-shirt that I’m wearing. Darla: Sure! Tina: Oh this is so embarrassing. Mom can you please stop dad from making a fool of himself…Mom? Tina’s Mom: Sign my magazine as well so that way I can shove it at the neighbors faces. *Makes a grinning mean look.* Tina: Oh come on! My parents are idiots. Darla: Also I should say this. What Tina said to you about her helping a woman is true as I was that woman who she help. Tina’s Mom: Oh I see. Thanks for clearing that up. Tina you are free to go. Tina: Ok Maybe this isn’t entirely of a bad thing. Tina’s Dad: Say you want have dinner with us. Darla: I wish I could but I have to go. I don’t want to waste any time as I’m looking for someone. Tina:(Someone? Don’t tell me he is looking for him?) Darla: Well See ya. Both: Bye, come again. She head out. Tina turns back and see both of her parents with joy. Tina: What? Both: Are you a magnet for celebrities. Tina: DONT YOU DARE! Up in her room, she lies on her bed hugging his penguin plushie, making a curious face of what Bruce’s life is like. Tina: You know maybe there isn’t a lot of that I didn’t know off. But I wonder how did he manage to get together with a super star? I didn’t even knew he could be that popular. Plus the more I think about? The more curious I am of what his life is like. But if I found out that he was dating her then I’ll be surprise on how he admit his love for me while he is dating someone. *Gulp.* I think I just barf a little. Anyway I need to ask him this. Because it just really bothers me. What time is it? She looks at the clock to see that its about 6pm. Tina: Well its not late but unfortunately my parents are here. Maybe if I sneak out? After thinking a bit, she decides to take the chance. She lies to her parents that she’ll be doing homework even when she really does need too. She lock the door to make her parents think that she doesn’t need to be bother. She opens her window and sees that is a little long of a jump but sees an opportunity as there is bush just next to the fence. With confidence she makes the leap of the fate and manage to land safely. Tina: Well that was a bit easy. Over jump and I could of gotten hurt. Anyway. *Wipes leaves off her shirt.* Time to ask him. She quickly head to his house as fast as she can. Once there, she sees that the lights are on which means he is there. She knock on the door. But when the door open, it was a women. She has tan skins, wearing a flower dress. Women: Can I help you? Tina: (I really hope this is not going where I think its going.) Umm is Bruce here at the moment? Women: No he is not. He away for the moment. Tina: Away for the moment? I have a hard time believing that. Women: You must be Tina. Sorry but your boyfriend doesn’t have time to hang with you. Tina: HE IS NOT MY BOYFRIEND! Women: I see you’re playing hard to get. Well he is not and I’m just keeping the place nice while he is gone. Tina: Fine what ever! I don’t care if I ask anyway. Women: You mean Darla? Tina: WAIT! You know her!? Women: What? He didn’t tell you? Seriously I don’t get his taste in women. Tina: Tell me! Did he date her since he is young Women: Why don’t you ask him. She shuts the door before she could ask again. Since she can’t ask him directly, it seem that she needs to ask him from his friends and knows who is the person to do it. But she needs to get home before her parents find out. But what he didn’t notice is that someone is watching her from a distance. Dan: Well this is interesting. It seems that I just got the scoop of the sentry and not only involve her but also my ex girlfriend. Oh boy this is interesting! |
Nov 24, 2013 6:41 PM
#20
| Just as the school bell rings, she quickly heads to Bruce’s house as fast as she can. Once there, she politely knock on the door as hard as ever. Women: *Opens door.* Oh its you again. Tina: Yes and this time I want answers! Women: You’re really annoying. But I might as well so come in. Tina: Thank you. She walks in but doesn’t realize there is something on her notebook. A small speaker to be exact. From a distance we see Dan using this to hear the conversation they are gonna have. Dan: Alright. Time to turn in on what they are gonna say. *Tunes up his wrist watch.* Women: Why don’t you sit down and lay your notebook here. Once she put them down, she slams her hand on the notebook. Women: Sorry. I thought I saw a bug. Tina: Ok a little too dramatic. Women: Sorry I hate bugs. With that, it ruin any chance of Dan hearing their conversation. Tina: Before I ask can I ask what your name is? Nicky: My name is Nicky and I happen to be one of his buddies. Tina: I knew it. *Raise one eye lid.* Nicky: So you want to ask me on who is this Darla person that you met. Tina: Yes. Straight to the point! Nicky: Sorry but I can’t give you a complete answer. Tina: Ok now you’re just toying me! Nicky: Well that is something you’re going to have to deal with when talking to me. Tina: Can we just get to the point! Nicky: You want the point. All right then. Yes he does know her but you are asking if they had something back is when he decided to tell you. Which so far he hasn’t tell you. Tina: You really one cocky- Nicky: STOP! I do not like cursing. Tina: I’m not leaving here until I get a answer! Nicky: I see you care for him this much. Tina: I don’t care for him! I just want to know if she dated this celebrity when he first met me! Nicky: You know I never understand why he so dedicated to you! Tina: What do you mean? Nicky: I knew him since he was a kid and yet he chose you. Tina: Wow wow wow! *Waves hands back and forth.* Don’t tell me that he dated you too!? Nicky: Don’t get your head in a twist. But it does bother me that she chose you. But I just gonna except it. Tina: Let me guess. You have a crush on him as well. Nicky: Ya something like that. He is the only person who able to see me who I really was. Tina: Look I don’t know how that guys mind work but I will tell you this. I only care for him as a friend. That is all but yet he doesn’t see that. Nicky: Well that is him in a nutshell. You see when he is young, when he thinks of something. He thinks it as it is. I never got past the “we are friends” in our kind of relationship. It just bothers me a bit. A moment of silence. Then both took a deep breath. Tina: Well since you not gonna give me a full answer I might as well leave. I rather find this out myself. She heads to the door and before she leaves, Nicky puts her hand on her shoulder. She turn her head and sees that she has a serious look. Nicky: I’m gonna make one thing clear. If you break his heart, then you’ll answer from me! But I hope that happens because that would I get to kick your ass. Tina: Well we should see. Once she exit the door. She heads to her home quickly before her parents starts to worry. But what she didn’t expect is to bump into Dan. Dan: Oh hello there. Tina: Oh yay its you. I thought I have seen the last of you. Dan: Please. Like you can get of rid me that easily. Tina: You mean how Yuki almost killed you? Dan: Don’t remind me! So anyway what are you two talking about? Tina: I knew you are following me. Dan: Oh come on. Beside you still have something I need for the public to hear. Tina: You know I can scream. What do you think your fans will think of that?*Smiles* Dan: Ok I see when I’m not wanted. But what you getting yourself into, might be as worst as the Yuki incident. He leaves. But however she can’t get that feeling of what Dan said. Just the thought of those words gives hers chills. She tries to ignore those kinds of words as she just realize how Dan is when he gets to his scoops. He is not gonna let him get under her skin that easily. Once she got home, Its very shocking to see her again in her house hanging out with her parents. All she could make is a very upset looking face. Tina: ARE YOU KIDDING ME! Darla: Oh hey- Tina: MOM! DAD! Why is she here!? Tina’s Mom: Oh she just wanted to stay over for some tea. Darla: Which I must say this is really good. What is in this tea? Tina’s Dad: Well it has- Tina: Why would you invite her! Darla: Oh come on Tina. I thought we are like buddies? Tina: Whatever. I’m gonna go to bed. *Head to her room and close shut.* Tina’s Mom: Oh don’t worry. She does get that a lot when something unexpected happens. Darla: Oh don’t worry about. She kind of reminds me of myself. I’ll never forget the good times even if the person I who I know never shared the same thing. Its how life works. |
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