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TheLlamaDec 31, 2008 3:50 PM
| Loved MikariStar's one... just had to smile at the end, even though it was a bit obvious =P Also, it's pretty short, something I can't say about mine; I'm barely below the word limit xD |
| i loved mikaristar's too.^^ i liked how she used the host club roles like the mom and dad for kyouya and tamaki. and hunny's group of stuffed animals. ^^ it's a good story. |
Tinyazyn said: you're a judge right? lol, just don't favorite it instantly (don't mean it in any offensive manner, but I've seen one too many people who just favorite the first whateveritisabout they get exposed to and become biased when judging other things =P)i loved mikaristar's too.^^ i liked how she used the host club roles like the mom and dad for kyouya and tamaki. and hunny's group of stuffed animals. ^^ it's a good story. |
| but i did like it...... |
| Yeah, by all means. I wasn't trying to imply that you weren't allowed to like it xD |
| mmkay^^ btw, is that ll of the people that are entering? or are they posting a lil late? i know stupid question.. but yea. |
| Thanks everyone :D I'm happy you liked the story. ^_^ |
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Tinyazyn said: Well, we can't expect everyone to be here that soon. I'm one of the entires, but I just need to finish writing it over to my laptop (stupid computer crashed...), so mine probably won't be up until later tonight. Because several people might be busy or away during New Year's Eve, I set the time limit for posting their fanfics tomorrow =Pmmkay^^ btw, is that ll of the people that are entering? or are they posting a lil late? i know stupid question.. but yea. |
| okay. |
| Namida_x's story was good too. ^^ i like how she used the characters habits like hunny and his bunny. it's was a good story^^ but it didn't appeal to me very much. no offenses intended. |
| Yeah, naimda's story was good. Things may have seemed a little sudden, but then again I'm only at episode 14 and have now idea how their relationship develops later in the series (no spoilers, please!), so it might not be that sudden anyway. And then I am a person who prefers extensive character development, so take my opinion with a pinch of salt. But a great oneshot, no doubt ^^ *sigh* I more and more get the feeling mine is too long >_< |
| both stories have been good so far, im gonna wait until all 5 (?) are in before giving my feedback |
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| Ok, something went wrong here. Somehow this thread got mixed up with another >_< Fixing that now =P |
| And Saito, it's down to six people, our of eight originally: Lil_Neko *Too little time* Llama_Guy Imperial_Thunder gmsephiroth *no internet* midori-chan89 MikariStar LinsletWalker Namida_x |
| okay |
| well so far we have one story in 1st person and another in 3rd, its amazing to see how people are able to express themsevles and they're imaginations |
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| *nods* yea. and nice avi kage^^ |
| Hmm... it seems Imperial_Thunder forgot about the contest, so he's out =P LinsletWalker hasn't logged in for quite some time, so I doubt she's going to post it. midori-chan was the one we were waiting for, so I feel kinda bad if she doesn't post it (she hasn't t been logged on since the 30th...) |
| Llama_Guy yours was really good. it wasn't too long. it just kept te story going. i really enjoyed reading it. it was funny at the end and somewhere in the middle with hikaru and kaoru.. for got their"screen names". XP anyways. it was really good.^^ |
| Thanks ^^ I wanted to capture the craziness and expressionism of Ouran, so I did a lot of study on the various expressions they use; what they're called and how to best use them, and I hope that bore fruit =P |
| it was good. by the way have you finished ouran? |
| No, I'm only at ep. 14 =P Why? |
| just asking. ^^ ouran rocks. watched the series i tink 3-4 times. XP |
| Well... it's pretty good, at least =P |
| ^^hehe |
| midori-chan, that was... o.O wow, a pretty interesting read, really. I mean, things happened a bit sudden and all, but what can one do? It's one shots after all. I mean, I'm a person who loves seeing extensive backgrounds and development, but it's not like you can just write up a novel for the contest either =P So yeah, a pretty interesting short fic ^^ |
| Thanks :D It took me a long time to write, because I'm better at writing long fics with more details, so I understand what you mean; I didn't know how to write more background info without turning it into a multi-chapter fic (happened to me once :P) |
| I see =P |
| lol, while reading Midori-chan's, I thought it said 5 months instead of 5 years. :P and then the proposal, i was like, "whaaaatt?!!" i figured out what was going on a little later. lawl. anyhoo, are more fics gonna be coming in? |
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| I'm a big Star Wars fan so Llama_Guy's fic was a lot of fun, not just because of that though, the story itself was very amusing. :D Namida_x's story was a bit fast but cute :) midori-chan89 had a surprising ending, well written but sad, didn't see that coming, nice story though with good descriptions. |
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| so no idea when the other contestants might come back and post they're stories? |
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kage-bunshin said: Check my club comment on it ;)so no idea when the other contestants might come back and post they're stories? |
| I must say, gmsephiroth's fic was a very interesting one. The second-to-final part was a bit obvious (the final clash and all), and the final part of it was the only path I could see you taking that would make the fic end in a good way, so I'm glad you did =p All in all, a very good fic! |
| just posting to say that i saw this thread. I have to get off the comp in five mns, so I dont have time to distribute my points, but I'll do it tomorrow! hope thats okay... =P |
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| currently not in the condition to read the fic, I'll do that tomorrow and have the results posted before the end of the week for sure :P |
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| gmsephiroth's fanfic was fun, maybe even more so since I'm a Final Fantasy fan. I liked the dream style. ^_^ |
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ASHGARY said: just posting to say that i saw this thread. I have to get off the comp in five mns, so I dont have time to distribute my points, but I'll do it tomorrow! hope thats okay... =P ..............I was not expecting ten pages on history homework o_o I'll try my best tomorrow, again x_e |
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| current progress: finished MikariStar's Holiday finished Namida_x's You're a Best Friend Anyone Can Have in the process of reading Llama_Guy's Star Wars Crossover the rest... not in my radar yet :P Feedback will ONLY be posted after I've completed them all. |
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| btw... how many judges are there again? seems like only ASHGARY and I are reading the fanfic LOL do we need more judges? |
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| There are 5 judges: ASHGARY saitoXhenrietta kage-bunshin kaminakun Tinyazyn |
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| I've PM'ed every judge >_> |
| I am almost done with my grading of all the fanfic... but I don't think it is fair for the other judges (and the writers) to have me post up opinion on the grades until all the judges have at least read them |
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kaminakun said: Well, then, PM them to me.. no wait, make that natsuki-chan. I'm a participant, after all =P She can post them all when they are delivered, I reckon ;)I am almost done with my grading of all the fanfic... but I don't think it is fair for the other judges (and the writers) to have me post up opinion on the grades until all the judges have at least read them |
Llama_Guy said: kaminakun said: Well, then, PM them to me.. no wait, make that natsuki-chan. I'm a participant, after all =P She can post them all when they are delivered, I reckon ;)I am almost done with my grading of all the fanfic... but I don't think it is fair for the other judges (and the writers) to have me post up opinion on the grades until all the judges have at least read them well a judge already posted the points, I might as well follow suite |
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