| Name : Age : Gender : Appearance : Nationality (Pretty sure most Japanese people don't have names like Grace-Natasha... if ethnicity is different, include that too please) : Occupation : Bio. : Sexuality (Heterosexual, Bisexual, Homosexual, Pansexual, even Asexual if you really want) : Personality : Region (which part of Tokyo do they live in? North, East, South, or West? Characters can move) : Sekirei (again, no one is winged yet, so leave it blank) : Interests (optional) : Other (optional) : Theme Song (optional) : |
KagamiTheQuietMay 27, 2013 5:50 PM
| Name : "Nice to meet you! I'm Takeda Chisaki, but you can call me Chisa-chan!" Age : "Haven't you heard you should never ask a lady her age? Just kidding, I'm 18 - isn't that cool?" Gender : "Are my charming looks too confusing for you? Female, of course.” Appearance : Nationality : “Ah, I’m Japanese… Only Japanese.” Occupation : “I’m a high school student, so I don’t have a job, silly.” She works part-time at a restaurant. Bio. : “I’m just an ordinary girl… No dark past or anything.” Chisaki grew up in Tokyo and has lived in an apartment all her life. When she started elementary school, she had a strong interest for extracurricular activities, especially sports. Her best friend, Ishida Daichi, warned her not to as the boys wouldn't let her play, but she tried anyway. When the boys told her that she would never beat them because she was a girl, she practiced even harder until she could beat them mercilessly. After that, the boys stopped telling her that she couldn't win. When senior high came around, she decided to move so she could go to a school to further her training. To maintain the costs of her apartment, she got a job to afford living expenses and to not be solely dependent on her allowance. She still visits her parents on a regular basis. Sexuality : “I’m only into attractive boys.. Err… Heterosexual.” Personality : “I thought I’ve been doing a good job at showing myself in these answers.” Chisaki is a very independent person, having lived by herself for nearly three years. She's also very extroverted and is willing to be friends with almost anyone, although she does have her standards. At times however, she can be quite stubborn in what she wants, especially when proving a point. Region : “Which region? Well, I live to the northwest, so I guess the North is where I live.” Interests : “What do I like? Everyone likes music, right?” Chisaki enjoys listening to music and has a wide variety of CDs at home. She also still reads manga, although she tells most people otherwise. She also takes an interest in sports, particularly baseball. She really likes hanging out with others too. Theme Song : |
| Name: "I'm Ouji Tsukiko, nice to meet you." Age: "My age? I'm 20." Gender: "I'm a female. At least, I was the last time I checked. Are you suggesting otherwise?" Appearance: Nationality: "I'm Japanese." Occupation: "I'm... A university student and a part timer at a convenience store." Bio: "What is this, twenty questions?" Tsukiko moved up to Tokyo from Hiroshima after getting accepted in a university in the city. Her parents divorced when she was quite young and her father walked out of the family without a second glance, leaving only her and her mother to fend for themselves. Being rather close to her father, Tsukiko took the divorce quite hard. As an only child, she knows what a tough life is, maturing earlier than other kids her age did. Her mother started dating another man when she entered middle school and remarried the same man when she was in high school. The entire time, Tsukiko kept to herself, studied and worked, despite her want to create a warm family with her step-father. Sexuality: Heterosexual Personality: "Why don't you tell me?" She thinks herself to be socially awkward and a little rough around the edges, but her problem is that she doesn't know how to communicate with people. It was around the time of her parent's divorce when she started to keep to herself, always choosing to stay in the library with a book than to be out in the sunshine with her classmates. This eventually became the reason for her lack of friends and the divorce became a wall between herself and others. She can come off as particularly cold and unapproachable, but she doesn't know how to present herself in a better light. She doesn't have any people she can call her close friends so she's not too sure about how she is when she lets her guard down. Region: "I guess I'm part of the Southern region." Interests: She enjoys reading, listening to music and, to a certain extent, cooking. |
| Looks all good to me :) -Accepted- |
| Name : "Yo I'm Kuro Ryuu! Nice to meet ya'!" Age : "You can probably tell by looking at me, but I'm 17." Gender : "Uh... Pretty sure I'm a guy." Appearance : Nationality : "I'm pure Japanese." Occupation : "Well, I'm a Junior in high school. I'm also a part timer." Works part time at a movie/game rental store. Bio : "Well, I'd say I'm pretty normal." Kuro grew up in Tokyo for most of his life, only for short amounts of time would he leave to go to another city or county. He never really had to struggle as his family was had a decent standard of living. His father recently got a job offer too good to refuse that would allow him to make much more money for the family, however the job was in America. Kuro decided to stay here in his parent's old home, here in Tokyo. His parents trusted him so it didn't take much convincing for them to allow it. That was a few years ago. Sexuality : "I'm straight... Er... Heterosexual." Personality : "I'd like to think I'm a nice guy." Kuro has always been very kind and sympathetic to everyone. He is never discriminatory towards people and is always trying to help when he can. He is always trying to make new friends and reach out to others, no matter who they are. Kuro also jokes around a lot, even in serious situations. Though he is very lazy, lethargic, and groggy in the morning and will a lot of times ends up falling asleep in his first period because of this. He dislikes fighting and violence if it's not just sparring or for fun and games. Region : "Hm.. kinda close to South but I guess you'd say the East?" Kuro lives in the east however near the border of the southern Region where his job is. Sekirei : Interests : "Well, I like a lot of things." Kuro likes music and loves to play guitar. He also enjoys boxing with his friends and to help people out when they need it. Theme: |
EmperorsChosen01Jun 19, 2013 5:41 PM
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| I have a question - is Kuro the surname/family name or is Ryuu the surname/family name? Also, someone can't be prejudice, but rather discriminatory. I also don't see how it's ironic that he displays typically teenage behavior.... And I don't see how being apart of the boxing club has anything to do with the rest of his character, nor how he would have the time for it with his job and band... |
| Ryuu is the family name, also I fixed the things you mentioned. |
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| Sorry if I came off as too nit-picky... -Accepted :) - On a different note - we finally have a male Ashikabi ! |
| Don't worry about it. I think it's actually kind of better that you take a look at the character and see where it can be improved or doesn't make sense rather than just barely glance at it and accept it ^^ |
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| Okay, that's good to hear. I've tried to stop doing that. Although I think that I might come off as nit-picky sometimes, I'm more concerned with helping others to improve as you mentioned. Of course, whether or not they decide to listen is on them, but I know that I really appreciate well meaning critiques as they help me. I want to know if things make since to others, as I'm not always very good at expressing myself. Ah, sorry about all of that. I'm glad you appreciate it though. |
| Name : My name is Hiro Rikiya, " We're having a nice day today" Age : "Well my age is um..... 14" Gender : "I'm obviously male, right?." Appearance : Nationality : "I think I’m Japanese." Occupation: "I go to school and I do very well" Bio. : "Really a bio, with this cute face?" Hiro moved to Tokyo when he was age 1. His parents told him he was Japanese but never of any other nationalities he maybe. His parents died when he turn 7 years old by a fire at their apartment in the South side of Tokyo. In his parent's will they left lots of money got pass down to their son. His parents had lots of enemies that wanted their money for themselves, but had no concern for the boy at all. His parents didn't spend tons of money on expensive cars or even on a big mansion. They thought of just having a small apartment and saving money for their sons. He went to East Tokyo to try and forget his past. He studies at home with his older brother always making A's on all the subjects. He has a tutor that came by Monday through Thursday to check his work and give him more homework. On the weekends he just goes to the beach and sat there on the bench eating candy. He hopes to make friends at the beach. Sexuality: "Um... I am not sure but......... I am Heterosexual, I think" Personality: "I’m cute, adorable, shy and childlike, very easy Wouldn't you then say that he's used to getting what he wants from his brother, and this is because of his parents constantly spoiling him? And forgetting everything at the age of fourteen, except for things such as school and his hobbies, is that the result of some sort of disease? Region: "I hope I know where I live but maybe the East" Sekirei: Interests: "I like to go to the beach, candy, play with trains, and have a good time." Other: “I carry the green creature toy around, holding it. It comforts me and calms me down if I get upset or cry if I lose it." (The green creature in his Appearance) Theme Song: Natsukage |
12345trent8Jul 6, 2013 9:02 PM
| This is definitely going to need some editing before I accept. For starters, basic capitalization, punctuation, and other grammar rules seem to be non-existent in your skeleton. Was it a rule before? No, but it sure was expected. Is it going to be a rule now? You can sure bet on that. Also, it really doesn't make too much sense for him to not know what he is. That information would be stored somewhere, whether it be on a birth certificate, school records, etc. and his surname would surely point at something... Also, how can he afford to live by himself, let alone afford a tutor if his parents are dead, and he doesn't have any money? For that matter, your bio could be a bit more detailed. |
| It' better, but it still needs a few adjustments. As both rxnkim and I have mentioned, how does he not know his nationality? Also, just saying that he inherited "lots of money" doesn't excuse the fact that a child was living by themselves. At least make him live with his grandparents or an aunt or uncle. Another thing, I don't think anyone is ALWAYS able to get what they want. Even people who can manipulate people very well don't always get what they want... At least not without that unwanted consequence... |
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