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Mar 30, 2010 12:49 AM
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There is one Angel in the area and it is approaching the nearby town.
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Mar 30, 2010 1:15 AM
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*Enigma makes his way to the border of Sector Four and prepares the cloaking mode on his Eva. After a while he starts scouting the area for enemies, he's being extremely careful, seeing as he was given no information on the amount of Angels or what kind of Angels he's facing. Finding the Angel took ten minutes, and it is walking slowly against the town. Its current location is 15 miles from the town. Enigma inspects the Angel, it seems like it's a close combat type, judging from the two swords it's holstering on its back. Enigma's current location is on a cliff, above the Angel. He uncloaks his Eva and starts charging his close combat blasters. A few seconds pass by, and Enigma starts sliding down the cliff towards the Angel, the Angel notices this and turns its head against Enigma, doing nothing else. Enigma approaches the Angel and lunges at it from the cliffside, he aims both of his blasters against the Angel's core/chest. The Angel doesn't do anything, so both of the blasters hit the Angel's chest, exploding and making the Angel recoil about 300 meters backwards. The damage revealed the Angel's core, so now it's vulnerable. The Angel then gets up and unsheathes its swords. Its eyes start glowing red, and Enigma prepares for the attack. The Angel screeches, distorting Enigma's screen, but stunting his field of vision, when he regains control of the screen, the Angel is already very close to Enigma. He jumps backwards and lands on the cliffside, successfully dodging the Angel's rush attack, but the Angel keeps on running against him, at a lower speed now though, it's preparing to hit Enigma with its swords. Enigma regains his composure and assumes a grapple position. The Angel closes in on Enigma and thrusts his swords forward. Impact. A soundwave echoes throughout the desert, and when the dust clears up, the Angel is impaled to the ground by his own swords. Enigma is in the sky, charging his lance. He throws the lance, aiming directly at the Angel's core. The spear is closing in, and the Angel lets out another screech, distorting Enigma's flight mechanism, making him fall to the ground from a very high distance. The spear hits the Angel's core, penetrating it, causing it to explode. The explosion hits Enigma's Eva while it's still in the air, altering its current falling direction, it's sent off flying towards the cliffside. Enigma's Eva hits the cliffside and slides down the cliff. A few minutes pass by, and Enigma gets up. He notices the rain of blood, and starts sprinting off towards the town. When he gets there, he secures the town and tells them what route they should take to escape. After he's done, he takes off and makes his way to the docking bay.*
Mar 30, 2010 2:04 AM
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(wasnt that angel a lil too easy to beat?
i mean it never dodge it just stood there and took ur attacks basically)
Mar 30, 2010 2:36 AM
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(I take it you have watched NGE? The Angels are very odd creatures, some are easy to beat, some are almost impossible to beat. I don't think I wrote it in the post, but my character's Eva went berserk in the part where the Angel rushed into him, which is why it was such an "easy" to beat. And another reason might be that I didn't have time to write a very lenghty post. If you have any further qualms about this fight, please message me.)
Apr 12, 2010 8:45 PM
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(holy shit that was long)

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Apr 13, 2010 6:01 AM
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(Man, that was long. I'll try my best to read all of them without losing concentration)
Apr 13, 2010 10:14 AM
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(I thought it was a tad short like it kinda lacked substance, I like dialogue but w/e Enigma is a Master so pending on the Angel's lvl it can be a bit easy)
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Apr 13, 2010 11:19 AM
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(I thought that Angel should be easy, since the Commander told Enigma that this was an "easy mission".)
Apr 13, 2010 7:40 PM
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(I agree with both Motion and Sync. It DID lack substance, it wasn't too short but not very long. I would have liked to see it put up more of a fight but saying that, it was supposed to be easy, and it was the first mission. You'll get better over time AND you are a master. Good job)
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