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Aug 20, 2022 8:12 PM
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is it good? is it bad?
give me ur opinion on this “what are you doing stepbro” LN
Aug 20, 2022 8:28 PM
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It's decent, some chapter are better than others.

I like the way the POV constantly swaps between the two characters.

The part I like the most is when it goes full on wholesome, I don't think the comedy works that much here, so I rather just see the couple being wholesome together, the flashbacks are really the best because of this.

I'm not a big fan of the art-style tho.
Aug 20, 2022 10:10 PM
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MadanielFL said:
It's decent, some chapter are better than others.

I like the way the POV constantly swaps between the two characters.

The part I like the most is when it goes full on wholesome, I don't think the comedy works that much here, so I rather just see the couple being wholesome together, the flashbacks are really the best because of this.

I'm not a big fan of the art-style tho.

sounds like an interesting LN actually, ill give it a try ty
Aug 22, 2022 7:49 AM
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I really enjoy it! Probably my favorite LN at the moment. It starts off more on the comedic side and slowly gets a little bit more serious and dramatic. For a good few volumes, I enjoy that there aren't too many characters so that the author has plenty of time to develop those main 5 characters.

Like MadanielFL said, there is a lot of POV switching which I find to be really cool. When a situation is happening, you sometimes get multiple POVs of it so the author can ensure we get the optimal experience.

Though not everyone agrees with me, I really like the development of the side characters too. Some find it distracting from the main ex-couple, but I thought it made the story more interesting.

The further you get into the story, the more addicting it becomes.

Hope you enjoy it!
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Sep 14, 2022 12:48 AM
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Well-written and insightful as I have access to the character’s inner thoughts. Better yet, it comes with multiple POVs from many characters, the lead characters do not monopolize the storytelling of this LN.

The LN taps into the concept of love in early-adulthood as the characters are maturing. And it does it very well.

Unrelated comment: It’s a shame that anime form does not allow extensive expression of the monologue the characters make in their mind
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