Intensity

XtransylvanianX said:
...Ehh...'Eff you. It's the best I could do on short notice..*is thinking about the baby seals..*

...There once was a young girl. For the story's sake, we'll call her....Storm. She grew up with a rough childhood, and tended to prefer to be alone. By a cruel twist of fate, she fell in love with a boy who was destined to break her heart. For a while, Storm was happier than she had ever been. She told this boy things she had never told anyone before, because, even though they grew up differently, they shared the same out-look on life, and harbored the same feelings of indifference and darkness. What she didn't realize was that his darkness went farther than she thought. But, she no longer felt alone. She no longer hated her self, and saw herself valued in someone else's eyes. She grew tired of her constant fighting and hitting things, hurting herself in the only way she knew how. In her eyes, cutting was for the sissies who couldn't handle true pain. And then, like all things, her happiness came to an abrupt end. He grew distant, and thier fighting grew worse. They broke up. Storm thought the feelings of sadness and sickness would never go away. But, infront of everyone else, she went on like her normal self, never letting him see that inside she was screaming. After awhile, he finally straight up told her why he had broken up with her. He....was in love with an anime character. She was her rival for his love, and Storm had lost. This character was perfect in every way because she was the idea of a girl that someone else had dreamed up, and Storm was, regretfully, only human. There was no way she could top being in a fantasy cybernetic world. This character, though Storm did not know it, was her true rival, and Storm had been soundly beat, her feelings towards the boy having no effect on his final choice. Thus, Storm lost the battle between her and her rival, and she has been fighting to regain the ground she lost from herself ever since....But of course, this is just a silly story...;)

PA_Shadow said:
Not to be a one upper but you guys need to know what I'm talking about when I say intense.

I got into a full out street brawl with some one who thought they were on my level. He pulled a raptor blade on me to make it a one sided effort. I dodged his wild slashing for a while looking for an opening. I (being an old soccer player) found me chance, jumped backed and landed a swift kick to his side with another to his face, breaking his nose. He screamed in pain as I felt the bridge of it snap. He learned his lesson and his place in relation to me. I was never bothered by that fool again.

Tsubamex said:
I thought it was good ^^
really imaginative =D