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PREGERS!!! Chap.1 summary: Hatori Basically thinks that he's pregnant.

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This is one of the many fan fictions that I wrote ... please tell me what you think!

It was a serene day at the seashore indeed. Azure seas covered the white sands of the beach. All of the Shoma family were there for a family reunion of sorts , with the omission of Akito . The sun was a rosy fireball as it prepared to plunge down into other seas. The sounds were mostly the norm except for the occasional rant from Kyo about the immense amount of water in front of him or “SORRY!” from Ritsu , who was dressed in a bikini despite the fact he was oh … a guy. As for Yuki and Tohru … they were too busy making out and cooing at each other to notice the festivities. Right now , the rest of the kin were preparing for the water race .

Momiji hopped up with great fervor onto an eroded molded boulder. He was wearing pink boxers trunks embodied with pink laughing bunnies. He also had a white T- shirt on which was not his plan , the lifeguards forced him to after constant accusation of being a girl.

“OKAY HERE IT GOES!!!!” Momiji pleasantly exclaimed “THE FIRST ONE TO REACH THE BUOY AND COME BACK WINS!!! ES GENT!(okay)” he bent over and did a peace sign with his hand on his hip. The spectators which were the Mabudachi trio: Hatori , Ayame , and Shigure listened intently , all planning to be the victor of the event parted to the commencement of the race which was the shoreline.

“I cannot wait to win the race and then , perchance win the approval of MY BELOVED BROTHER YUKI – SAN!!!!” Ayame pointed swollen with pride at the his younger brother who came up from Thoru’s lips to stare daggers at his older, but not particularly smarter, brother.

Shigure laughed hard and ruffed up Ayame’s perfect hair “not if I win first.”

The mabudachi trio’s attire was fairly basic . Shigure was clad in white boxers with red hearts adorned (they were actually his real underwear but who’s gonna notice … right?). Hatori was wearing onyx shorts which in joint with his hair screamed emo quality.

All very simple , except for Ayame. He was fully clad in his latest collection from Mine . A mauve and canary yellow swimsuit with a built in feathery boa coat that was made with nylon so that it would dry easily. Striped trunks and matching shoes a midst , yes , Ayame was a sight to see indeed.

They all bent over in eagerness awaiting the go ahead from Momiji.who was dancing around with a song in his head . Hands up he sung … badly “READY STEADY CAN’T HOLD ME BACK!!! READY STEADY GIVE ME GOOD LUCK!!! READY STEADY NEVER LOOK BACK!!!LET’S GET STARTED READY STEADY GO!!!

He pumped his hands down zealously signaling the beginning of the pursuit. The trio treaded trough the water . It was a close race for the most part , until Shigure pushed ahead , just before the conclusion .

Shigure tiredly sauntered out of the shore and into the crowd of on lookers who witnessed the race. Ayame soon followed and tapped Shigure’s shoulder and coolly said

“ I look forward to our next encounter Shii – san”

“And I you … Ayame – san”

Silence

“ALL RIGHT!!!” the duo pointed “finger guns” at each other and laughed.

The festivity continued as usual until someone shouted “WHERE’S HATORI!”

“HELP!!!CRAMP!!” Hatori yelped with persistence at the multitude of family in front of the drowning man. Shigure and Ayame plunged into the waters to save there comrade . In the few minutes that seemed like and eternity , Tohru and Yuki got up from there elongated make out sess to verify there cousin’s safe return. In a matter of time , the trio appeared , drenched on the shoreline of the beach , carrying a petrified Hatori , smiling

“OH YOUR OKAY HATORI – SAN OHMYGOSH OHMYGOSHOMYGOSH!!!!” Tohru belted out running toward the young man with determination. “I’m so glad your back … EHHH!?!?”

Tohru was so single-minded in wanting to witness Hatori alive that she forgot all about the “curse.” She absentmindedly embraced him and at the same time pushed him back into the water.

Now Hatori was in his other form of a seahorse in his natural habitat – the ocean

“OH!!! HATORI – SAN!!! I’LL SAVE YOU!!!” Tohru squealed uncontrollably getting ready to dive into the waters but was held back by Yuki who calmed her down.

“Don’t worry , he’s in the water. He’ll be fine. Besides , he’s way to small for you to go looking for him now.” Yuki nibbled Tohru’s ear lovingly.

“Well , okay … BUT I’LL SIT HERE UNTIL HE RETURNS!!!” Tohru raised her finger in innovation and sat on the sandy beach scanning the seas absorbedly.

After three hours Tohru was tired , but still bent on finding the seahorse holding a towel to embrace his nakedness.

About 15 minutes after, a naked, fairly stress-free and relaxed looking Hatori popped up and inquired

“Uh … can I have my pants?”

Yay!! This was really supposed to be a one shot but it started to run on too long soo … yeah! If you review … Kyo lives …CRINGE IN FEAR!!!



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