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Could be a 10 but the female lead lowers this to an 8.

You're looking for some straight smut with great art? Now you found the gem. But If you're not into some love triangle action and rather annoying female lead? Then pass.

Moa, our female lead, has issues. Let me try to explain without spoling... Imagine you have the best meal ever in front of you but on a far away counter you got a coffee, which would you choose? OF COURSE THE MEAL. But our FL is just so indecisive... She is doubting about stuff and never makes a STEADY decision which makes other characters ... suffer. She plays people basically but keeps them hoping. I don't appreciate that but I mean I guess some people are into it. Besides that she's cute (physically speaking).

Yura our male lead, is probably the most healthy man (relationship wise/ frienship wise and even body wise) you could ever meet. This man would help you lose weight, sew you a cloth, cook you a meal, treat you well. What can this man not do for someone he loves ? Even I who read everything till now, do not know. Man is gorgeous, marvelous, kind hearted and patient.

Now Yujin... Yujin is the example of mysterious hot male character. He's here just to make the female audience simp (sorry to say it but it's true girls). He has some plot tho, but he got me tripping. He's still pretty but I don't see anything endearing except his body but again, maybe it's because I'm too into Yura, I'm just saying this because plot wise this man is SUS.

So yeah, read for some good art and smut I guess and also to stan Yura (he's the OG I swear). Aight bye now~

The art and story was good but I feel so bad for--I don't wanna spoil it... he deserves better. T_T I hope the author will make a big come back for him. I feel bad after finishing the latest chapter. Hope author can update soon.

By the way I don't really feel good with big bro. I hate him. Ugh. He's an inconsiderate hyung. Right from the start I don't feel good about him.

The female character is great from the start but I feel like she's ugh I dont know Im starting to hate her in the latest chapters. But I'm still looking forward how ... the story unfolds. I hope she'll realize in the end who's the best guy for her.

Don't bother. it is sht, no matter what others tell you. And I'm talking about the writing, not the enjoyment factor. Because then, it gets even worse. The FL is plain dumb, but framed as insecure/youth/whatever. If you think you like stories with a premise like the synopsis is saying, thats ok. But this one is poorly done. You might even read the first few chapters and think "hmmm, maybe, maybe". But..... *sigh* Spoilers free.

So: the art is decent. Not wow, not annoying, just meh. You can look at it just fine, but it has nothing to capture your eye (not even when ... it is supposed to be shiny and glittery). Yes, some very ok scenes, but at the same time some proportions feel weird.

The story is... bad. I had to think a bit, if the general story is at least ok, but nope. The themes of youth, mistakes, forgiveness or whatever, are not ok here. Also, it is full of plot holes, plot contrivances and plot devices. Event A happens just to make Event B make sense, no matter what the characters are like. Or the use of every fkin trope there is: snow, drunk etc. So, no. Yeah, I know, we read these stories just to see how it ends, we don't really care about the "how", but thats only because the characters are interesting and/or funny. And because you usually "know" that the ending will be a happy one, so you're ok to see them struggle for a bit, even when the events make no sense and all could've been avoided if they talked like normal people. And, at the end, you'll say "I liked it" or "it was kinda boring". Those being the only good options. The other one is making the story so bad, with characters soooo cringe/annoying that you might drop it halfway. Just to make it clear, I'm talking for this kind of genre. Because you can go that way in a setting with NTR, blackmail, gang-r*** and other stuff tailored for certain readers. But this is not it. And the author went for drama to make his story interesting. Thats a generally good idea, but here it was done poorly. Some stuff is just "too much".
A weird example. to the extreme. Imagine some grape, and then "I'm sorry". "All good bro". (After reading this "story", pun intended).

The only good thing about this is Yura. And you will like him a lot (yes, maybe even when he becomes a simp. Maybe). Everything else is sht. Even the side characters are dumb. Although, one of the best lines is given by one "don't cry, you're not the victim here". Fking amazing and true! But the main idea is that while reading, you'll get to the conclusion that this FL doesn't deserve a happy ending. Period.

Anyway. It gets a rating of 2, for the decent art. The writing's quality is very low. Also, no overal enjoyment factor. Also also, no matter how much enjoyment we might get from Yura (that is until he becomes a simp), this media is still sht.
Have a lovely evening (*sigh*)