Mar 31, 2025
Not gonna lie, the idea is great, but the execution is terrible. The author tries so hard to position a character as 'the one' she's looking for to get revenge, but it's pretty obvious that the other guy was the real 'culprit.' The romance is awful, right from the start, the author shows a clear bias toward the blond guy, making him problematic while forcing interactions and romance between him and the FL.
The only thing that improves is the art, because the plot becomes a total mess. There aren’t any plot twists, the romance is garbage and feels unnecessary, especially since it’s so predictable. The
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'revenge' gets forgotten because of 'love,' falling into the same cliché you can find in any story: an emotionless person finds 'love,' abandons everything for the other person, and lives happily ever after.
Another issue is that this author relies way too much on 'death bait.' It’s incredibly frustrating to read because every time someone seems to die, the next chapter pulls out some ridiculous reason to save them. There are no real consequences, and everyone turns into a superhero who never dies, no matter what happens. but you know when the author has to use this type of plot and even then the story doesn´t grow you know she´s garbage.
I’m glad this story didn’t gain traction because this author doesn’t deserve any recognition. There are better stories to read, and if you like the art, just watch some edits on TikTok—don’t waste your time reading it. One funny thing is that after revealing who the ML was and facing backlash from the audience, the author tried to draw the ML like the guy who lost. It’s hilarious—a skinny guy with no training suddenly becomes as strong as the other one.
This story try to be so deep but fail in every level.
Reviewer’s Rating: 3
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