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The story had some potential, but it ultimately struggled due to rushed pacing and inconsistent character writing. The ending felt abrupt, likely due to the short length. If it had around 30 or more chapters, the plot could have had the space to develop properly and reach a more satisfying conclusion.
Some plot elements felt poorly thought out. The romantic relationship between a teacher and a student was unnecessary and uncomfortable/Inappropriate. I think a relationship with a classmate would have been more believable and appropriate within the setting.
The main character's reaction to her girlfriend cheating was also difficult to understand. While she initially seemed upset, she
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