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The story is really weird, and it's basically a bunch of short stories mushed into one volume. A lot of scenes couldn't be understood that well unless a person has read both Food Wars and One Piece. Which is one problem of crossover stories. Nobody would know if the characters are developed well enough or not if they didn't read both series. And some scenes are not realistic since they look like they're improvised on the spot. Some character designs are really ugly, and it seems like it's for "comedic reasons", but the execution is NOT the nice version of comedy.

This light novel series's author has done a better job writing and developing the cast than the author of the main series. The story develops and gives minor characters more page time, and shows more of their personality and hobbies. Even though the series is full of short stories, there are actual stakes and character development. It also contains some scenes that didn't make it to the main series, and those scenes are really comedic. It's worth reading since it can show the chill adventures side of the characters than the full on brawl version of the characters in the main series.

The series is basically a bunch of short stories that are totally unrelated to each other. A lot of plot points never got full reasons for why they're happening, some characters just for Team Up Missions are way underdeveloped, and a lot of plot points are cheaply resolved. It's not worth the time, money, and energy if you don't like random short stories, underdeveloped characters, and underdeveloped scenarios. Even though some are entertaining, it's not worth re-reading. The story is really predictable since it's always the usual cheap stuff. The characters aren't well-rounded either since they are bland archetypes, not full people. Some situations are ... really unrealistic, and they're assuming all characters are stupid.

This story shouldn't be counted as a story since the book doesn't have a story at all; it's just a cheap excuse to draw two men having sex together. The story seems to be a fetish of the author, and there aren't any personality of the characters since they are blank slates. Characters are blank slates, and the plot doesn't have any significant plot points. The story doesn't even explain why some stuff is happening, even though it looks illogical. The character hair colors are also the uke X seme tropes of dark and light hair. It's a waste of money, time, and energy.

First off, why do the characters care about A/B/O that much, and why are all the couples shown in the story Alpha X Omega duos? Second off, why do the kids call Naoto, a grown man, "mommy" while using "he/him" pronouns when he's supposed to be a man? If we use this logic, then female alphas should be called "daddy". And why would they call the other dad, Hazuki, Ha-kun when the suffix "kun" is used for peers (friends, classmates, etc) or towards people with lower social status than you (employee, student, etc.)? And when Asanaga asked Hazuki for dating advice, he didn't say "How ... to date a teacher?" or "How to date a colleague?", he said "How to date an omega?". That's dehumanizing andleavese characters into one trait. And the kids in the story act too nice, calm, and too adultlike that they don't look like kids anymore. Normal kids would scream, kick, yell, blurt things out, and do all the chaos stuff, but the kids act like the nicest people ever or blank slates. Unrealistic. Then Hazuki's mom tends to want the main couple to have a lot of kids. That's dehumanizing. And Jun told Naoto to get naked and seduce Hazuki. Why? Why are the only few female characters this underdeveloped or sexualized? Then why would some kids bully omegas when the only differences between them and other characters are on heat and taking pills? The characters are way too much for a 5-volume series (it's 5 volumes at the time I wrote this), so that they're really undeveloped or one-trick ponies. Heck, the fact that they're not ponies makes it worse (pun intended, but still). The series makes me really uncomfortable because of the storyline. The fact that the characters don't call the romantic partner "boyfriend", "girlfriend", "partner", "husband", or "wife", and just call them "mates" makes the story feel like the author is trying to define the characters' sexual urges rather than true love. And they call each other "fated mates", which makes things worse. And the characters are all way overused cliché tropes. This series is not worth anyone's time, money, and effort.

First off, the two characters get too familiar with each other too fast. Second off, why are the characters taking showers with each other when they're supposed to be strangers? Third off, why does one of the main characters have D-cup-sized breasts? Fourth off, why is the kid shoving her face into the D cup breasts even though they're supposed to be strangers? The huge breasts are a fetish of the author since she did it multiple times in various stories, and the characters don't have much personality. The story is a waste of money, time, and energy, and shouldn't be read by most people.

The story is a mess, there isn't any logic in any of these, and those feel like fragmented pieces of random, ditched ideas. The stories inside it are way shorter than one-shot volumes, and a lot of characters are underdeveloped. Even some of the plot looks weird when being analyzed deeply. A lot of the stories feel like underdeveloped stories that don't have any potential at all, and it's not even worth reading. People shouldn't buy this volume and shouldn't read it either unless they like short stories. The characters don't really react in a realistic way, and some of them even act in a ... stupid way.

The story is a mess, there isn't any logic in any of these, and those feel like fragmented pieces of random, ditched ideas. The stories inside it are way shorter than one-shot volumes, and a lot of characters are underdeveloped. Even some of the plot looks weird when being analyzed deeply. A lot of the stories feel like underdeveloped stories that don't have any potential at all, and it's not even worth reading. People shouldn't buy this volume and shouldn't read it either unless they like short stories. The characters don't really react in a realistic way, and some of them even act in a ... stupid way.

After reviewing the first volume of the story, this volume sucks as well. I'll repeat what I said about "Restart After Going Back Home" here: [The story doesn't make sense, and it's hard to understand what's happening since the story goes by too fast. It doesn't explain the reason or stakes well enough. For the whole time reading it, it's hard to understand what the story is about, and the story is easily forgotten after reading it. The characters barely have any personality, and there is no reason for them to even show up in the story. Overall, the story is not recommended to be ... read if you value your time and money. Who cares about someone coming home since coming home is a totally normal thing? And why would anyone fall for a random guy they meet?]

Then, for this story, why are they going hungry? How? Did they become homeless? The story didn't really explain it. And these two volumes are marketed as two seperate one shots, so the story doesn't feel that connected as a duology, and just feels like two one-shots that somehow connect. There still aren't any stakes in the story, and it feels bland. It's hard for anyone to praise the story or remember the plot. The romance is not sweet since there is none.

The story doesn't make sense, and it's hard to understand what's happening since the story goes by too fast. It doesn't explain the reason or stakes well enough. For the whole time reading it, it's hard to understand what the story is about, and the story is easily forgotten after reading it. The characters barely have any personality, and there is no reason for them to even show up in the story. Overall, the story is not recommended to be read if you value your time and money. Who cares about someone coming home since coming home is a totally normal thing? And why would ... anyone fall for a random guy they meet?