This manga is very nice, and one of my favorite that is currently undergoing serialization. As others have already stated, I think that the greatest strength of the manga is Naoki Fujita's storyboarding and strong visual design. Although the artwork is definitely more on the rudimentary side, the careful and deliberate way the panels are laid out gives the work palpable tension and narrative momentum. This tension is what keeps me engaged and interested with the narrative.
For a case study to show a specific place where this manga excels, let's look at the confession scene on the bridge in chapter 39. Just before the big
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payoff, there are a solid two pages with no dialogue (unless you count the MC's stuttering, idk). The persistent shots of Nico's face, the fact that she averts her eyes in one of the panels, the close-up of Tatsuhiko's hands, presumably tightly clutching his bag (which ties back into hands, one of the important visual motifs as it regards their relationship) -- all do an excellent job of reflecting the appropriate level of tension that this scene should, and propels the reader through the scene towards the big emotional payoff at the end. The manga also did a good job of building up tension in this and the previous chapter so it really is a perfect little moment. Another moment that stood out to me is in chapter 41 when Tatsuhiko is getting reamed out by Nico for moving in with his guy buddies. While Tatsuhiko is apologizing and explaining his rationale, there is a set of successive panels over many pages deliberately showing Nico's expression slowly softening, which culminates in her apologizing to Tatsuhiko after a page flip. This is an excellent way to visually communicate the emotional progression of the scene and the shift in Nico's emotional state. These are just two examples that stood out to me, but the whole manga is full of examples where it uses carefully laid out panels that echo certain motifs to show emotional progression and draw the reader through many pages which eventually result in an emotional climax/payoff.
I also quite enjoy the characters. In particular, I think Nico's personality and character design are standout, and very unique for a female romantic lead in this era. Most female romantic leads in manga of this type, especially shonen, are the same tired iteration of the Japanese ideal of what a woman should be -- that is to say, polite, somewhat reserved, and conservative in both dress and sensibility. This character archetype is, in my view, boring and overdone. In contrast, Nico has many traits that would be off-putting to many -- she is aggressive, slovenly, boorish, outspoken, and generally wild and irresponsible, plus she probably drinks too much booze. Additionally, I appreciate her design -- she looks and dresses distinctly like an American, resulting in an appearance that is generally not seen in manga. It's not that I would even particularly like Nico were I to meet her in real life, I just find her personality to be refreshing, and it creates for more dynamic interactions between her and the more passive Tatsuhiko.
The themes are also well-developed. As someone who currently works hard to pursue my ambitions, I find the struggles of Tatsuhiko to balance his work with his personal life and relationships to be relatable. Fujita did a great job of realistically showing the isolation that one often must impose upon themselves to realize their creative ambitions. Overall, I don't know where this will end up by the end, but I hope it keeps going for quite some time, and I find it a strong example of how things as simple as storyboarding can turn a rather banal concept and setting into something fresh and compelling.
Update: I'm writing this after the release of the final chapter, #48 (the above portion was a preliminary review, written after reading chapter #45), so it seems that my hopes were in vain. Apparently, it had consistently been one of the least popular Jump series for quite some time, so I assume it got axed, but I have yet to see this confirmed. Supposedly, the manga was initially only supposed to go for a few chapters, but due to it winning the Million Tag contest, it got the rights to serialization, so I suppose we are fortunate it went on for as long as it did. I have a few closing thoughts now that it is all over:
- I honestly think that everything up through chapter 39 is near-perfect. The arcs are all internally satisfying, and each arc moves through to the next one in a way that keeps up strong narrative momentum. The end to the final arc in this section of chapters would also be great end to the series: ideally, Nico's song would have been the one included in the video Tatsuhiko wins the award for, thus fulfilling the promises made by the leads to one another in the beginning.
- Although the final arc (c40-48) has many individually strong chapters, it is definitely much slower than anything that came before it. During this period, it often felt as though the manga was meandering, but I had hope that the arc would slowly build to something satisfying. However, the slow start may have tanked reader interest, which forced this arc to terminate before it was ready, which I think is a shame.
- Whereas most of the arcs naturally lead into the next one, the ending of the last arc abruptly and randomly leads into the end, which really kills the momentum and prevents it from being satisfying. It feels like there needed to be at least another arc of buildup until Nico and Tatsuhiko get to work together, and there were numerous tensions surrounding this issue that never get resolved either. This is another reason why I suspect it got cancelled; the author likely didn't have enough time to smoothly transition to the ending, he just had to go for it regardless of the context.
Overall, this manga is mostly a solid 9/10 that is unfortunately marred by an incomplete final act and an ending that feels slapped-on rather than earned. However, it is hard for me to blame Fujita for this, as I suspect that this was beyond his control. In a perfect world, this would have either gotten the time to build all the arcs the author had planned, or it would have ended directly after chapter 39 so we could have been left with a shorter, more polished product. Unfortunately, this is not the case. What are we to make of the reality? Although I am soured by the way things ended here, I can't ignore the fact that the manga does contain a good 39 chapters of great fun with a complete story arc inside. There is just that pesky tail of unfinished business. I love this manga, but I doubt I'll ever be able to stop thinking about what it could have been. I'll keep an eye on Fujita's next work -- I think he's very talented -- and I'll never forgive shonen readers for failing to keep this one afloat.
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This manga is very nice, and one of my favorite that is currently undergoing serialization. As others have already stated, I think that the greatest strength of the manga is Naoki Fujita's storyboarding and strong visual design. Although the artwork is definitely more on the rudimentary side, the careful and deliberate way the panels are laid out gives the work palpable tension and narrative momentum. This tension is what keeps me engaged and interested with the narrative.
For a case study to show a specific place where this manga excels, let's look at the confession scene on the bridge in chapter 39. Just before the big ... Feb 24, 2024
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